Indigestion with a side of grumpy. I laughed so hard at that line. Cute.

Awwww.

You've given me a new OTP. I hope you're happy.

cute story, I was very sorry that we don't get to see more, I would love to see the continuation of this, even if its just a one shot!

Thanks

I love this! It is so sweet! :)

I always get so excited when I see you've posted something! This is fabulous and I can't wait for the next chapter of Brown Eyed Girl!

By the way, do you know of any other fics featuring Pavel/Joanna? (I've already read all of yours *multiple* times)

They don't have to be the main pairing, but as long as they're somewhere, I'll be happy as a clam!

Thanks, and I can't wait to see what you do next with Pavel and Jo!

this is too cute for words, can't wait for an update! you write this pairing so well :)

An older Jo McCoy/Chekov story! I really like how you've started things off-the relationship already established and whatnot-while still incorporating a bit of our current Halloween theme. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

Wahoogal

Thank you so much! I couldn't stop smiling as I read it. Things have been super busy/crazy/hectic/frustrating and this is just the pick me up I needed! Your writing is fantastic, as always, and Pavel and Jo are just adorable!

I can't wait for part 2, and I'm excited to see where you'll go in Brown Eyed Girl.

Once again, thanks!

-Actressen