I liked the idea of the virus and the twist at the end. There are so little good fics about Trin... Keep writing.

That poem was used in Eclipse too! I really liked the story. Im such a Smith x Trinity person. She really is amazing. I read the dialouges over and over. Great story. Keep writing. Love you loads,

Alexxis T. Swan

Outch. This story is way too beautiful!

hey...soz im jsut a bit confused...its late. im tired. but, i thought it wasnt agent smith who loved trinity, and i thought that trinity was shot?

sorry.

nice story ;)

I really like this story, and i loved the ending! It was really beautiful and sad too. I love smith fic like this, it was really good. I also like Illusion of Love, that was so sad poor smith! ( but it was well done. Keep writing! ;)

Well... This was... interesting. But cool. I lihed the Shakespearean twist :D And are you sure you actually MEAN that autor's note that says "Smith and Neo get togeether"? Because that would rock major. Heh, for the works of this story Trinity/Smith is the coolest option, but there simply isn't enough Smith/Neo stories around... :( But this rocks :D

Just read the story again, and wow. I never could write such beautiful angst. Good job! I'll stop bugging you to write more. You just let the plot bunnies come as they may and I'll enjoy the results.

This is brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Tightly written, gorgeous... I have to keep trying not to imagine Elrond, but that's *my* problem. (grin)

I'm glad you mentioned your fics! Icame over to see them, and am extremely happy I did. You are a marvelous writer!

On to read more now...

I love A Smith . He is so cool.

I feel numb after reading this... not that it isn't well written.

A fitting ending but... well, you already know what my alternative would be ;)

What is wrong with me? I can't stop feeling sympathy for the poor, lost soul of a sentient program. Please write a way happier ending for Smith, though Neo and Trin look cute together, Smith deserves Trin. Give Smith some happiness besides his life in the Matrix suxs and we all know that. Great story though, liked the "Exciter Virus" idea.

Nicely written, but as much as I like Smith angst, I think he needs some happiness. The poor guy! He had an absolute nervous breakdown in The Matrix! He NEEDS to relax...LOLOL maybe you could write a story about him taking a week off and going to Rio? LOL Smith in a thong...LOL Sorry, just the mental picture...can't you just see the look on his face? Ok, I'm done now...