|Reviews for Persephone Jackson and the Half Blood Olympians|
| sammy 2/2/13 . chapter 1
Please finish this stroy it is to good to end now!
| ella 1/17/13 . chapter 25
more please!? it is such a good story!
| Guest 9/29/12 . chapter 6
love the story
| Lone Wolf 8/18/12 . chapter 25
Hey, Rayne, or whatever you call yourself, if you don't like it, don't read it. Simple as.
| Kyuubi is Pimpin 8/3/12 . chapter 6
Nyx is a Primodial not a goddess
| Jacob 3/10/12 . chapter 10
If my friend Bethany is reading this then I have something to say. Well not say, but type. I have a massive crush on you and I have since we met. I cannot say this for two reasons, one is I always spend the moments I have with you thinking of you and two is I get nervous, what if you hate me. But I'll click the Submit button if you read this then tell me and tell me what you think.
| Jacob Unclaimed 3/8/12 . chapter 1
By the way the girl with purple hair is Bethany. I have a crush on her and we would have to be on a resedential from GTC in Bradford.
| Cloudcity'sbookworm 1/27/12 . chapter 25
i love this story so much! i hope you update soon. i know that ur prob. busy w/other things so i understand. i get busy sometimes too. so, i shall wait (but i hope not to long).
| Quibbler Queen 1/13/12 . chapter 2
VERY QUICK QUESTION IS HAYLRY SUPPOSE TO BE HAYLEY WILLAMS I LOVE HER SHE LIVES IN A FAIRY TALE!(from brick by boring brick)
| Turq8 12/9/11 . chapter 5
Hello, is this the Muse's Inspiration Delivery? Yes, I'd like an order of originality for this fanfic please. Thank you!
Persephone is leaving a bad taste of Mary Sue in my mouth. Does she have ANY flaws (other than her fighting temper, because let's face it, that will only help her when she's in a battle)? Anything that could be used against her? And don't say that she's fiercely loyal to her friends, because that's Percy's flaw, and this story is already too much like the book.
Your writing is good and it definitely has a voice, but I wish I could read something that you came up with on your own; not following Rick Riordan's storyline to the point of plagerism.
| Ariel Night 11/23/11 . chapter 23
Good story. Update soon!
| goldensnowflakedawn898 11/21/11 . chapter 1
Please keep twin told me to try your book... It was pretty good. I suggest you not put so much wating 'fishook' moments; my sister and I are TIRED if waiting for the next chapter.
| taryn kenobi 11/19/11 . chapter 1
| Ariel Night 11/17/11 . chapter 22
Cool. I had pretty much guessed that Persephone was the host ever since you first mentioned it but that just confirmed it. It's kinda funny that the host of Persephone's powers and Hades' son are gonna end up together. I actually reallly love Percy/Nico stories. Update soon!
| Yume Li 11/16/11 . chapter 22
That's a great idea you come out with. By the way, are you going to continue this story with 'The Lost Hero' and 'The Son of Neptune'?