Wow
Jasper I assume was thirsty

What will happen next?

So sad for Bella. I can relate.

A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I really enjoyed your writing style, and how it felt so much like one of those novels you quote at the start of each chapter. Thanks so much for writing it,

Wow, what a rough ride! This was an excellent super angsty read. I'm not really a super angsty reader so it was a little tough for me to read that style for so long. I'm glad it worked out in the end. I think I wondered if they wouldn't end up together about 4 times! Thanks for sharing your talent with us. :)

I can't even describe how utterly depressed I am feeling now.

This was a fantastic story. It was so well-written and such a different take on the original story.

I absolutely loved it. Thank you for this.

I have loved this story. Thanks for writing and posting :)

didn't realize they hadn't said 'i luv u' until that last bit. No wonder she left him.

somebody needs to kill bella, stupid bitch

Great story! I love your writing style. The pacing was fantastic, and I like all the little ways you tweaked canon into something new and wonderful. Great job!

Thank you for the wonderful read. I truly enjoyed it. Not only was the story line between Edward and Bella very compelling, but I truly liked reading Jake as the quiet hero instead of the villain. : ) The campers over on A Different Forest recommended your story and they rarely disappoint me.

Thank you for sharing your talent with us. - FB

Lovely.

Your writing style is truly excellent.

I'm sorry for Jake that his people turned on him. He gave up so much to essentially save Edward and Bella, I wish he had been rewarded in some way. No good deed goes unpunished. Hawaii's wonderful, though, so I'll assume he'll be extremely happy there. I feel bad that I was dissing him in earlier chapters! I still feel some shade of melancholy hanging over Edward and Bella in this chapter, Bella particularly, but maybe that's just her fundamental character. I am glad they got an HEA; I was a little concerned they wouldn't. Thank you for this beautifully written, thoughtful, and complex AU story.

Gah!