omgomgomgomgomg more more more more more more

Awe nothing like a happy ending at least for now anyway!

And no somebody broke my long review record :'(. Well I have an all new story to make long reviews for now!

Teaser was amazing, hurry up and update b/c I don't know how long that teaser will hold me over. And as for her trainer, I have a feeling it will be none other than are favorite Colt Cabanna. I look forward to reading Invincible as soon as you post it! :D

YES YES YES YES YES!

"Just how many other girls in the world would kill to switch places with her right now?" ME, goddammit.

I absolutely LOVE this story! Thank you for this amazing story ;D

Great chapter! I read the teaser for Invincible and I can't wait to read more!

I am smiling from ear to ear. Great job with the ending to this one and I am so excited for the second part. The teaser was great and yes it was a teaser and like you said like a movie trailor. A lot of things seem to be going to happen next and I am excited for the, what looks like, a very wild ride ahead. :)

AHH! So excited! Can't wait for the sequel! :)

Ahhhh that ending was amazing! Great job on the teaser too!

IM SO EXCITED RIGHT NOW. I CAN'T WAIT FOR PART 2. xx

Okay first off this review is not a flame I swear - I have just found your fic and read it from start to finish and I would like to share my thoughts with you, im sorry if my review upsets you as I swear it is not my intention, and if you need me to explain some of my comments, then I would be happy to do so. With that being said and the greatest of intentions in my heart, here goes -

Hi - I have just found your story and whilst I do enjoy reading it and think that seph and Phil make a great couple and I think that they have a great shot at making their relationship work.

That being said, I do feel incredibly sorry for the little boy Joshua, the very fact that she seems to just palm him off on everyone and anyone who is willing to have him, makes me think that she’s not a very good mother - not once in her negotiations with the wwe did she think of the implications of what she was signing up for, did she think of josh, it as all about punk and what she thought was best for him. Here she is about to go travelling around the world with the wwe - what about her son, the son who she has repeatedly said is the most important thing in her life ?

She has just thrown herself into this life that’s all about her and punk and their relationship and its all about them, should she not be thinking about the fact that josh is going to see her with another man that is not his father - and what about the fact that punk doesn’t like kids ? And if she is such a great fan of his then she should already know this.

I swear this is not a flame, because as I said I do enjoy reading this fic, I guess I just don’t see the point of her having a son, if he is not going to be a part of the fic, or so it seems even a part of her life, I mean she’s just too selfish to be a mother, and that’s fine but if you weren’t going to make josh a part of this story then why make it so that she has a son ? Since the beginning of the fic she is just flying off to here there and everywhere, I understand that josh is always with someone, but surely if she as such a good mother then she would be taking care of him herself, if not all of the time, then at least for a little while, and it seems she spends zero amount of time with him. Who will be looking after josh while she is off running around with a guy and living out her dreams ? I mean when was the last time she even spoke to him, let lone saw him ? - I don’t know if you have just been to caught up in all the romance/drama, but you seem to have just forgot about him, in fact the only time he’s even mentioned is when she can use him as an excuse to push people away or make them feel sorry for her. Surely if her and punk are going to be a real couple then surely he has to meet her son, or at the very least she should check in on him, call him, think about him, something, and surely she’s actually going to go and see him at some point, or get him brought out to her, if she is his primary caregiver why has she not seen him in months.

And im sorry to say that she has a tendency to be a bit of a Mary sue, I mean its all well and good her being great at things - but everything ? - she’s going to completely turn punks career around ? All the while saving the wwe from its descent into crappiness, and she’s an amazing writer, talented musician and all round brilliant person ? And she’s going to take on any professional wrestler that wants to talk crap about her ? Like I said has a tendency to be a mary sue. Not to mention a drama queen lol - and I thought that she was shy ? doesn’t seem so to me.

I struggled with whether or not to post this review as I realise that what I have said isn’t exactly completely complimentary to the story. But im hoping that you take it in the way that its meant - not to cause offence or upset you or hurt your feelings, but to be completely honest with you about my opinion of your fic, and while I do like the initial story concept , the whole single mother meets punk and they fall in love, I absolutely adore that idea, I just feel like maybe you have gotten sidetracked from that slightly, I mean you have the punk and single mother falling In love thing, but unfortunately the son doesn’t actually appear anywhere in the story - apart from a few minor scenes, where he was then given to someone else to take care of. - so im hoping that you take this review for what it is - my honest opinion, that I felt I should share with you, take the time to review you in an honest way, rather than the standard - loved it cant wait to read more - and whilst I know its great to get any feedback at all, im hoping that my in depth review might be welcomed by you as well.

I saw the picture manipulation and i loved it! I'm happy to know that you are making a series.

So far , so good (:

I kinda can see Punk being a horny bastard , since -according to him- he's StraightEdge . No ; Smoking , Drinking , & Promiscuous Sex bahahahaha !

I like the idea of a series ( lookin' foward to reading more from you , bud . )

-ConchaaRex

YES! So happy to hear this and love the photo manip. This next installment looks to be very interesting. :)

*breaths sigh of relief and gives you a high ten*

Yea a series! :D PS: Checked out the fic manipulation and I loved it! The quote is amazing and that one pic of Punk performing that move off the top rope turnbuckle in the middle is pretty sweet!

YES!

Now get that new chapter up or ELSE.