awesome!

I like this one a lot. It's pretty amazing that you can write like these! All the story has a charm, I am enchanted with it, so please I'm your huge fan now I really need more hahaha, who is not about to say that with a story like this, but however!
Update it as soon as u can please : )

I really like this! Keep Going! :)

Amazing plz update soon

This is pretty cool and interesting. Keep writing!

Gah. Seriously late review. I apologize for the delay. v;

So without further ado! Prepare for a somewhat long review, in apology for taking so long! D

I feel like the title, Balancing Act, comes into this story already. The first chapter teeter-totters between playful, funny, and/or energetic moments, like Pepper's time at the Comic Con, Skye and Pepper's banter, and Nicky's glomp attack, to serious, tense, and/or slightly dark moments like Skye's revelation of her father being sick, and her constant refusal to really talk about it. It's great. D

You've also fleshed out the new character's you've created with their introduction. Not only does Skye's paragraph of description tell a good interesting amount, but her dialogue with Pepper shows her personality as well. 3 Nicky also shows adorable energeticness, like his love for Pepper. D

Lastly, the details are AWESOME. X3 The description itself is already awesome, but the allusions to real life items add an awesome affect to the story. D

You did a great job! X3 And on random musings I made during the story, is it weird that Skye and Pepper's relationship reminds me a little bit of you and me? You're Skye, the sane and calm one, while I'm kind of like Pepper, which certain adjectives would fit us both perfectly. D And I thought Skye was blond at first. With blue eyes. That's how I imagined her, because I always related the name "Skye" to "sky" which lead to sky blue eyes, which lead to blond hair. It's weird, but you already know that my thought process is weird. D

An-y-ways! This was a great first chapter! ;D Good luck to your next chappie!

Thank you for the shout-out! And I am SO happy you added in Skye and her issues in the first chapter! It really added a lot more drama to this chapter, and it really made me want to find out more of what will happen! Plus, I am SO happy we got to meet Nicky in the first chapter! He is already my favorite OC character! He is just SO adorable!

Oh and I taking it I can't be apart of the guessing game of the anime characters you mention in this character...because you told me already, right, lol?

But anyways getting back to the story, I really enjoyed the first character and can't wait to find out more about Skye, Pepper, Nicky, and how Tony will make things more interesting! Great Job!

Wonder where the story is going to go

I'm intrigued.

Paprika Demure. That is just the kind of alias Pepper would pick. I also like that she inhabits a larger world that just the Tomorrow Academy.

Thanks for the plug at the end. The money will be wired to your Swiss Bank account as usual ;3