|Reviews for Balancing Act|
| katie 2/10/13 . chapter 3
| PiperPotts 2/10/13 . chapter 3
I like this one a lot. It's pretty amazing that you can write like these! All the story has a charm, I am enchanted with it, so please I'm your huge fan now I really need more hahaha, who is not about to say that with a story like this, but however!
Update it as soon as u can please : )
| Haytar96 2/10/13 . chapter 3
I really like this! Keep Going! :)
| Guest 2/7/13 . chapter 2
Amazing plz update soon
| Roninarnia 2/7/13 . chapter 2
This is pretty cool and interesting. Keep writing!
| Mana the Cat Magician 11/5/11 . chapter 1
Gah. Seriously late review. I apologize for the delay. v;
So without further ado! Prepare for a somewhat long review, in apology for taking so long! D
I feel like the title, Balancing Act, comes into this story already. The first chapter teeter-totters between playful, funny, and/or energetic moments, like Pepper's time at the Comic Con, Skye and Pepper's banter, and Nicky's glomp attack, to serious, tense, and/or slightly dark moments like Skye's revelation of her father being sick, and her constant refusal to really talk about it. It's great. D
You've also fleshed out the new character's you've created with their introduction. Not only does Skye's paragraph of description tell a good interesting amount, but her dialogue with Pepper shows her personality as well. 3 Nicky also shows adorable energeticness, like his love for Pepper. D
Lastly, the details are AWESOME. X3 The description itself is already awesome, but the allusions to real life items add an awesome affect to the story. D
You did a great job! X3 And on random musings I made during the story, is it weird that Skye and Pepper's relationship reminds me a little bit of you and me? You're Skye, the sane and calm one, while I'm kind of like Pepper, which certain adjectives would fit us both perfectly. D And I thought Skye was blond at first. With blue eyes. That's how I imagined her, because I always related the name "Skye" to "sky" which lead to sky blue eyes, which lead to blond hair. It's weird, but you already know that my thought process is weird. D
An-y-ways! This was a great first chapter! ;D Good luck to your next chappie!
| Socrates' prodigy 11/4/11 . chapter 1
Thank you for the shout-out! And I am SO happy you added in Skye and her issues in the first chapter! It really added a lot more drama to this chapter, and it really made me want to find out more of what will happen! Plus, I am SO happy we got to meet Nicky in the first chapter! He is already my favorite OC character! He is just SO adorable!
Oh and I taking it I can't be apart of the guessing game of the anime characters you mention in this character...because you told me already, right, lol?
But anyways getting back to the story, I really enjoyed the first character and can't wait to find out more about Skye, Pepper, Nicky, and how Tony will make things more interesting! Great Job!
| Finny-Kun Goddess 11/2/11 . chapter 1
Wonder where the story is going to go
| Soap Lady 11/2/11 . chapter 1
Paprika Demure. That is just the kind of alias Pepper would pick. I also like that she inhabits a larger world that just the Tomorrow Academy.
Thanks for the plug at the end. The money will be wired to your Swiss Bank account as usual ;3