 OnthaEdge487 7/30/03 . chapter 10Oh, I can't wait to see what happens! This just gets better and better by each chapter! Gr...I want to read more, but it's time for me to hit the hay, lol. Anyways, superb job on this fic. I'm putting ya on my fav. author's list, just to let you know. Well, I'm out like disco suits and mullet cuts! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/30/03 . chapter 9Holy shocker! (LoL, that was so lame...) But . . .Stacy? STACY? You're kidding? No . . .I never ever would have thought of her . . .My reaction was about the same as Trish's, lol. The ending was killer, as usual. And yet again, the chapter rocked. I best be moving on to the next chapter. Toodlez! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/30/03 . chapter 8I wonder what they're going to do now . . . are they going to fight Jezebel's cronies or something? This is so suspenseful, and so well written! Wonderful job! Lataz! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/30/03 . chapter 7Well, by now you probably know what I'm going to say, so I'm just going to quit the mumbo jumo. Excellent chapter! I'm dying to find out more about the 2 accomplices, and Jezebel's 'powers' or whatever they are . . .Well, I'm off to read the next chapter. Tata for now! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/29/03 . chapter 6I loved the way this chapter ended! This fic is just amazing . . . But who is this mystery accomplice? I'm intrigued . . .well, I'm off to the next chapter. Toodlez! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/29/03 . chapter 5Ah, ya left it at a damn cliffhanger! And she took Matt! DAMN IT! Oh this is getting so good ... I'm freaking loving it. Excellent job. Toodlez! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/29/03 . chapter 4AH, you left it at a cliffhanger! I hate those, damn it! But it's OK, cause there's another chapter . . .hehe. This is so good! But I'm sure you're aware of that by now, right? I'm dying to see who this person is Jezebel is going to 'meet'. . . is it Sara? Well, only one way to find out, right? I'm out like disco suits and mullet cuts! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/29/03 . chapter 3Loved it! I hope Mark finds a way to stop Jezebel before she causes anymore havoc . . .altough I highly doubt that'll happen just yet. Poor Trish, all she did was ask a question . . .But wow, I'm really into this fic, nicely done! Buh Byez! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/29/03 . chapter 2Awesome chapter! Poor Matt, he's so confused, lol. I'm loving this story already, you're a talented writer! Well, I'm off to the next chapter! Toodlez! |
 OnthaEdge487 7/29/03 . chapter 1This chapter rocked! You have me hooked! Wow, so this girl looks like Lita? Freaky. Well, I'm assuming that's who she looks like ...but I'm probably wrong knowing me . . .heh. I'm definately going to read on ...great job, Toodlez! |
 femalephenom 9/22/02 . chapter 15 wow, i really really love that ending...its so...unexpected - and fantastic! I do hope you write a sequel, cos if was even half as good as the first then...wow! |
 Cat Lea Takersdarkone 9/19/02 . chapter 15I love how you left us hanging. And you better write that sequel soon because the first was too good not two. |
 LizzyL 9/18/02 . chapter 15i had a feeling that was Jezebel on the bike! Matt is one Big idoit He should have use his head! ThinkAmy would never leave her friends behind! Matt is an idoit and now he back right where he was before. Are we going to see more powers from the others? Does Jezebel have more followers? Is Trish and Jeff at lasy tell each other how they feel? Are theere poepl like Mark and Sara out there that could help them? I need to know! lol.. i need to know! |
 BizGirlCharlie signing in can bite me 9/18/02 . chapter 15 Oh, I loved this story so very much and I'm glad there's gonna be a sequel. Poor little Matty! I wanna save him now! Lol. Ya know what's great about this that I dont think I've commented on (and if I have, here we go again, lol)? You portrayal of Sara, giving her a main role and making her really cool, not the evil wench she's usually made to be by jealous little bitches. So, way to go for making her cool, as I'm sure she probably is in real life. Hope the sequel comes soon, this ending totally rocked! |
 Female Phenom 9/15/02 . chapter 11Yet another amazing story, as always i can't wait for more! Hope you post again soon! |