Marrler calls Hild Oni-Sama huh? Well thats new.

I want to definetly hear all of them! But most importantly about how Mara got the scar on her arm. Please update soon!

-Zaya_Ayame-

Man! I thought I'd never find you! Listen. Ya don't know me, and I don't know you. But you do know my little sister Liongirl09. She's been begging me to get to everyone she knew on this site. See. Her accoutn was taken off cause some bitch or bastard framed her for false info and she was kicked off. She didn't take her reviews down, or did she stop reading your story. She loves this fic, like she does so many many others. I read it a whiel back and thought it was well done. But I'm 21 and doing stuff in life and don't have to review so I'm sorry for that. Liongirl09... stopped writing after what happened. She was so depressed and upset. Not from this from other things happening in her life. This was her way of playing. Having fun. Then to know your fun was taken away forever hurts. But like I told her, there's more sites out there. However... to her. It's not "home". She calls this site "home", because of you. You and other author's she met. I hope she gets over this and her other prob's soon cause she's scaring me. Later! Keep writing! Never give up!

I say continue the fic for now, then have the sidestories later.

BTW, it has a nice beginning, dont let it die!

You have real ability and can make your reader see exactly what's happening.

Okayyyy... well, I think this story has a lot of potential, if you would just take that *Completed* thing off. I really think you could do a lot with this... if you thought about it long enough. Well, that's to your discretion. But I really, REALLY like it!