i loved it but you have got to keep going on the story, the suspense is killing me!

what will he have to do to help her? can't wait to find out great chapter!

wow very cool fanfic! I hope you update soon!

Great update! I love this story, it's different from all the others, with Bones and Mencheres being evil, that is, if they really are, maybe it's just Cat who believes that, I hope she is wrong and it will turn out good! Although I have my doubts

Whaaaat? Omg what is Bones doing? And I can't believe Mench would act like this without a good reason, but I have to admit it's kind of cool to see this bad side of him ; ) Great chapter. Update soon!

Oooh interesting story! But what are you doing to Cat? And what about Mencheres? Is he really the bad guy here? Lots of questions, I hope you update soon! Oh and I'm happy to see someone else writing NH stories again, for a while I was afraid I was the only one writing for this fandom now : )

I'm glad you decided to continue! Great chapter! Is Cat really going to become human? Can't wait for more!

You can't leave it there, write more! I need to know what will happen, and what's up with Mencheres? Great fic so far, i really hope you will update!

Hey there, interesting start so far :). Quite an original plot idea, making Mencheres the "bad guy", I'm curious about the direction you are heading with your story, I'm sure it will be easier to judge once you've written more ). Greetings, Emma