Awesome story! I totally didn't expect them to become a 3 way hook up!

Just a comment, and I'm not trying to harp on you or anything, but is there a reason you use Zolo instead of Zoro?

Not trying to be mean or anything :) just wondering why you don't use the official name.

i would love to find out what happened in the gully. i love this story. i hope you will write about it.

I really enjoyed reading your story :)

You'd really shuld get a beta-reader, though. Someone to read the chapter before posting and help spot - and fix - all the little mistakes in it.

Just some friendly advice. ;)

love this story. poor zolo is so confused. you are doing a great job with this story.

I absolutely love this story and can't wait for more! I'm surprised how much i liked the way Silk disappeared but I kind of wish the others had more of an experience with the memories of her fading like Zolo does. I think it would have given it a slightly better transition into the "she was never here" experience that he crew is having. But that's just a thought. I look forward to the next chapter!

Awesome !

Ahhhh! so short! It was so cute!(cute is actually not a good word to describe whats going through my head, not even close but its the best i can do right now)I cant wait until you update more! so wonderful:3

O.o

Awesome story so far!

Please update soon!

i LOVE Zoro in this chapter!XDXDXD asdkkjfsfgshgfhsdglkhs im so excited for more and what his flirting is going to be!

I think your story is great:D im a little confused about Silk but shes very interesting and i love it, I cant wait for more!

Hey I really like your story and can't wait till the next hcapter comes out _ keep up the good work

Haha good chapter :D update soon

This's really good. Can't wait to read what you come up with next _

Update please :)