Please write a new chapter

This is getting more and more interesting! Keep it coming!

Well it's pretty interesting though I would split the chapters instead of putting them thrice in three chapters... Also the use of capital letters might help...As well as some grammar mistakes... If you want I could help you with that.

But I really like it! You should continue with it!

Ok... just noticed one small thing in my last Review... "träd" is a Swedish word... It was ment to be "read" ... but I'm writing with my mobile... and Swedish is my native language... so it changed the word... stupid mobile...

(Träd Tree)

Awesome! I've always liked Sakura evil... oww... it have been so long since I träd WITCH... I miss it...