Yet another good story written - you are a very talented writer and I thank you for taking the time to write them.

really enjoy your writing!

You captured ed perfectly in this piece and greg as well. Great job!

Excellent! I LOVED it! The way you write I can see whats happening on the TV screen in my head. I loved the fact that Greg cuffs Eddie (made me giggle just a little), and the comment to Greg about his drinking - loved it and hated it at the same time, only "altered" could I see anyone from the team making a hurtful comment like that, but it truely shows how much Eddie is hurting, that he is willing to lash out at anyone around him. (even the /sideways/ jab at Wordy...) Can't wait for the next one, be it OS or new or continuing of one of your other stories!

Ahhhhh, I really liked it. it's so cool how they are there for each other, like brothers. They really understand each other. You did a great job!

Poor Ed! What a choice Sophie has left him with. It's nit fair - how do you choose between your family that you love and a job you love!

Loved the story! You could feel Ed's anguish!

I loved that Greg was able to be there to help him. Gteg had his own issues at one time so it was good that Greg was the one to help Ed.

Great job (as always)

Wow, POWERFUL, Heatbreaking , Pain ,Friendship, Hurt, Confusion .that was Great Andorian, you could FEEL all the EMOTIONS of ED/GREG. poor greg having been there and not really being able to help ed:{ I HOPE AND PRAY SOME DAY I WILL HAVE A FRIEND LIKE THOSE TWO.

Love it. I love Ed drunk here, just absolutely love it. The slur is something I can never get right but i like the way you did it. I just love the whole scenario, Ed drunk, the bartender calling Greg and having to handcuff Ed, I especially like the way Ed called Greg a drunk (obviously because he was drunk himself) and I just love the dynamic there for a second. I just love it. Short and sweet and awesome as always. Thanks!

another round of applause for Alice. another good one. can see it as i read it, and i like when that happens. could see you continuing this cause we know what Ed's decision will be. an arc between this and "good cop"? i'm just saying... or just more one shots, that'd be great too!

This is a fabulous story. It was one of the stories where you lose track of time and actually feel like a patron in the bar, or a fly on the wall in Greg's apartment. These are the best kinds of stories.

You expressed the angst in such a way that it really touched me. These are the kinds of stories that leave a lasting impression on me.

Great Job!

Great one shot :D I love Ed in peril, keep writting them they are awesome.

I loved the interaction between Greg and Ed, they are great friends.

maybe if possible you could continue this story... it seems like a potential multichapter story ;) and you know I like Ed in peril

Alice keep writting :D

AIP this is a great one shot :D

Great story! Love Greg ;) and of course Ed! Lol that was a good episode and your one shot is great with it! Thanks for telling me to check it out! Sorry I didn't see it, hopefully my alerts are fixed if not I have no idea why it's being weird! Lol

Oh NO you better keep going. You have a great talent for writing so please don't stop. Enjoyed it all. As iread I can just see all the action take place. PS at least you did hurt him this time lol

Missed this epi, but I like your story a lot. Hard choices!

Good story. I liked the interaction between Ed and Greg.