Gorgeous and lyrical I love the image of the bright leaf in Ziva's hair and the expectation and the suddenness of the kiss is gorgeous! You've really captured the feeling of autumn in this!

this is amazing.. thank you for writing this beautiful story
*sobbing*

That was really good. Seriously.

BB, I love this little story. I may have reviewed back when you posted but can't remember. At any rate, hope you're still writing and that we can have something new from you soon!
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Autumn is my favorite season! I also feel that it passes by fast.

This is sweet, light, and makes me happy. :D

It's so adorable :3 N'aww

I haven't seen anything from you in a while, I'm glad you wrote this. It's truly wonderful. Very in character for both of them. And the lyrics tie in well.

it's so autumn pretty plus passionate :)

reminds me of the book cover for A Chance of Sunshine gp/product/images/156846133X/refdp_image_0?ieUTF8& n283155&sbooks

Ahhhhh! Such awesomeness to wake to, I feel giddy like Ziva. This is beautiful. Not only do you, as always, capture them so perfectly, I can see and feel the scene. And it's sweet and funny and heartstoppingly romantic and man, do I wish you were the one writing! (meh, they can keep their staff for the icky bits, I don't wish that on you!)

So fun to see to see 'brightblue' in my fic to read folder again. Yay, thank you! Now I'm going to be greedy and say hope for more soon :-). And I don't know that song (I don't know any songs) but the lyrics you picked from it are great. Thank you for writing x

This is wonderful. I read it last night and again this morning, and it made me weepy both times. It really gets me when Ziva has to leave while they are questioning the suspect and realize-I could lose him anytime and now he feels like is mine to lose. And then she grabs him and kisses him at the car. Sob! I am so glad to see one of your stories again. You are one of the best Tony/Ziva writers around!

Love this.

Glad to see something new from you. It was a real treat

I really liked the whole gentle vibe and hopefulness of this story.

It struck me just right on a Saturday morning.

It seems very much like something they would do.

::pleasant sigh:: The romance of the kisses mixed with the uncertainty. This is exactly how Tony and Ziva would react if they were to just suddenly slip and let go. Great job!

Very sweet...welcome back to the land of writing! :)

Brightblue, this is absolutely beautiful. So well written, really clear imagery and could really experience the feelings of the characters because of the description. Lovely!