ESTE JUEGO ES MUY SUPER BUENO

como juego

an amazing story with lots of unexpected twists and turns

amazing. bit TOO lifelike mind...

Love how Red Bird found a crack in the pigs defense and exploited it! though sad to hear about the eggs :(

This was the best Angry Birds fanfic I ever readed! Please make a seguel (part 2), you can make a wonderfull story out of the last chapter! Ahem: Red Bird as a hard but nice time taking care of his children together with Female Red Bird. you can make some funny things out of this and add some drama and suspense by using my previous ideas. Please make a seguel it would be so awesome! :)

NOOO! SEGUEL SEGUEL SEGUEL SEGUEL PLEASE IM READING THIS IN THE MOENIN BECUS I WOKE UP TOO EARLY AGAIN AND READED THIS IT WAS SO BEAUTIFULL PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS OR A SEGUEL!

OMG r they f**king now- shut up KiKe, just review this chapter already! Amazing! I holded my breath when I readed that part of the crossbow. Aw, I believe this story is going to end soon... A little hint, it would be amazing if there was a secret bird -like that assasin- who doesnt likes the peace at all, and comes with an army of birds who think the same way. Also something elese, but this is your choice- a secret cousin or something. Ah well, you decide. Keep goin'! :)

Aww, that was so cute! I hope the results will be positive. So King Pig was actually on the good side! Coooollll, I never hated the pigs anyway. Keep going, :)

! Cooolllllllll. GO ANGRY BIRDS TEAM! GET BACK HIS MATE! R, E, D, what do ya get? RED! GO BIRDS! Heh, and I'm not even a cheerleader, if this is what ya call cheerleading. Succes, Red Bird. Safe Female! NXT CHPTR!

Ah, poor Red... I'll send him a get well soon card, can you deliver it for me? :) Oh, and send him greetings from me One little tip, if you're not english, then it will be usefull to use Google Translation. I've noticed that some words we're from the present, and some from the past. It is usually good to write like it had happened in the past.

Hmm, I don't really hate the Pigs, but I also don't hate them. They're just... acquaintances. :)

AAAAGH NEXT CHAPTERRRRRRRRRRR I LUV ANGRY BIRDS!

Awww, Red Bird is just so cute! He's my fav. How you describe the surroundings is good, also the emotions. Very well, I can't add some tips. Ah well, can't wait for the next chapter. :)

OMG, this is the best Angry Birds Fanfic I've readed so far! GAWD, buildings, elevators, dinner, breakfast, laptops, EVERYTHING. I can imagine one of them having a Mercedes Benz! X3

'P.S. Study this letter carefully, and destroy it once you're done. Don't worry, this is edible paper and not that cheap office paper crap. (I'm just hinting)

P.S.S. You're on your own out there, no one is going to help you if you get caught.

P.S.S.S. This is a secret mission, no one knows this besides the king and his advisers.

P.S.S.S.S. Don't f*ck up, period.'

'I'm burning it next time.'

'Smart Move Dumbsh*ts! I GOT YOUR EGGS! LOL!'

Man I laughed my ss almost off reading this. XD

This was the first chapter with some funny spots :D Awww, Red! Why you're stealing the eggs? I hope he gets back his MIND soon, and then kill King Pig, making him wish he was never born. Keep up the good work! Oh, it's so exciting, wanna read MOAR! :D

Aw, poor Red! D: Dude, this is amazing! I wouldn't have dared to give the main character so much pain and misery, but it just adds more drama. Man, this is good. MORE! :D