|Reviews for The Luminous Future|
| Crash 12/27/12 . chapter 2
A really nice attempt at a crossover. You don't get carried away and rush plots easily like some people here do. An interesting story, granted it is your first. Update soon. Your fans are waiting.
| RiddleMeThis17 9/10/12 . chapter 4
YES. FINALLY. AN UPDATE. I LOVE YOU. LIKE A FRIEND. A REALLY REALLY REALLY AWESOME FRIEND.
I just forgot if that meant I was the reallyx3 awesome friend or if you were- Oh well, we're both really, really, really awesome!
And uh... Why is the dialogue bold?
Anyway, shortness aside-
EPICNESS! . Can't wait for the next update!
| RiddleMeThis17 7/23/12 . chapter 3
... Wow. Amazing. Brilliant.
| Skybarrier101 12/25/11 . chapter 3
This is kinda hard to read..you should use dialouge in your story, seperate the quotations the characters are saying from the paragraphs.. This is a great story none the less!
| MammonDaughter 11/4/11 . chapter 1
I'm laughing too hard to write anything meaningful, get back to you later!