Personally I think you shouldnt do the third plot

What a lovely chapter indeed. One of the few where I didn't have the urge to strangle of them for being so frustrating. It also gave me a bit of nostalgia reading about Astrid trekking over to Tadfield looking for Hiccup...just like in the early days of their budding romance.

After a yr and a half and 45 chapters, I understand why you would feel burnt out. Certainly take your time to think about what you want to do. You've already given us so much enjoyment with this wonderful story and we can't thank you enough. You'll have support here no matter what you decide. If and when you do end this (a day I will refer to as Armageddon) I do hope it won't be the last we see of you and your wonderful writing talent.

Alright so this was a good chapter and I guess kind of a closure to this arc per say and I think taking some time off is good for anyone so you can have more than enough time to make your decision on the next plot so good luck with that.

Otherwise I enjoyed the Hiccup/Astrid moments in this chapter for sure and just looking forward to what you come up with next so update soon!
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So if you were to do another part to your story where a rival would be introduced than I assume that, that "rival" would probably be Heather and honestly I'm probably 50-50 on that I mean it could work and at the same time it could drag out the story so I'm honestly fine with either one you do just if you do end up doing it then be careful about how you approach doing it.

Cyclone20

I literally read all 45 chapters in 2 hours or so. And it was totally worth it.

You have combined the dragons and the victorian society perfectly! I really love this story :)

Too cute. If you do add a third plot it would be interesting to see the woman Stoic wants Hiccup to marry. It is really good and they are finally getting married. Yay!

Hi!

Boy, it's been a long time since I last reviewed I think :) but I have been following your updates with much happiness! I still enjoy the story very much, poor Astrid... that sure is complicated. I do can say I'm glad she decided not to wait too long. If you spend your whole life always wondering what other people think, you never have a life of your own (but you don't have to disregard it completely but listen more closely to your trusted people first :) ) That's what I life by, anyway :)

You know, I think you should definitely continue this story, but rather in a sequel. I feel that if you do continue now, you might overstretch it - not enough butter on too much bread (as Bilbo says). I don't mean I think it will be bad, but rather that you might want to close now, take a break and fill your lungs with new air and then release it in the story. So I'm in favour of a third plot, but rather in a sequel :)

And this was a lovely chapter, just for the record! Her mother is sort of exhausting indeed :P but I enjoyed their light banter, I feel they're finally truly on the mend :)

They're officially engaged! Finally! I'm still against this third plot thing if it prevents from getting married soon. So far you've done a good job with holding off the marriage, and still keeping it interesting, but another delay in the marriage would just be ridiculous in my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Loved this chapter! Great characterisation and I'm starting to like Astrid once again :)
I would love for this fic to go on and on forever, but if you're starting to get burnt out, or (god forbid!) there's a chance you might give up before the end if you make this longer, it may be better not to start on a third plot. But as I've said, I would love for this fic to never ever EVER end! I'm actually rather intrigued by the new characters in the third plot... will Heather be in it? Ooh is she Lady Brathem?

Considering how fast news of what happened to Astrid while they were away I would expected the attitudes of the people of Ervenshire would be calling her a harlot. Though I assume that they only heard snippets and not the whole story of what went on between Mr Whyte, Hiccup and Astrid. Though I'm sure someone will show up to break that illusion, if you catch my drift. But do what you will, dealers choice. As I said before, I'm all for another plot. As long as the lovely couple ends up together not to worse for wear. Hope to read more soon.

Nice chapter. I still think you should't do the third plot. They've been through enough trouble already haven't they.

I really liked this chapter! The reactions and dialogues of the characters were perfect, and the way astrid adjusted so well to being back was accurate as well! The only thing I could say would be that there were a few problems with grammar and spelling, but besides that, great job as usual!

I love all of the detail that you put in your writing, way more than I probably ever will, p
Ease keep up the great work as you have for the last 2 years

Okay, here's a good solution for your problems : Give this story a good ending, then write a sequel continuing off this one, with the third plot and new characters.

Don't do the third plot. End this strong and introduce them into a sequel. This is a great story and I really want to see it end strong. It would be a shame for it to go unfinished or have a rushed ending.