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Szahara again 5/10/12 . chapter 7
(I'm not tired so review is back to English.)

I was just thinking of this story yesterday. Said to myself "Wish there was new chapter Shattered Flight" and today voilá. I must be a psyhic.

Ah, Starscream you're so nice... I like him both as a bastard and as a good guy, I'm totally hopeless. His exchange with Megatron was great, they still have wonderful dynamic.

The chapter was short, but very heart-warming and a bit bittersweet. You got all the right reactions and emotions nicely. Thanks for the update. :D
Szahara again 3/27/12 . chapter 6
I chewed my nails off it was so exciting. Good chapter, and I really don't know what else to say... beside I loved it, again and maybe: Yay, Megatron kicked the Fallen's behind, nice.
Szahara again 3/27/12 . chapter 5
Double review for you, nice isn't it?

I'm glad you mentioned Vos. Is there's a very good chance there'll be a little bit of Starscream later? I like the guy in SG and every universe, can't help it... he makes me laugh. And I always forget that Soundwave is such a "hippy" in SG. I'm also glad, that Impactor was able to escape. The end was foreboding and creepy, interesting that it was Megatron who "changed" Orion into Optimus, I loved that detail.

Overall, great chapter, I enjoyed all the fights and plots you put into it. And yes, I noticed that you hid Orion in it very sneakily. I always think it's funny that SG Optimus is more blood-thirsty than the G1 Decepticons. By the way, the real Orion constellation can still be seen on the night sky when the weather is clear... but only till April, don't miss it.
Szahara again 2/3/12 . chapter 3
Looks like I'm reviewing backwards.

Wow, that was a great chapter, lots of action, lots of excitement. Murphy's Law dictates: now that Ratchet and avoiding him was mentioned, he will inevitably appear. I have a bad feeling about this...

Unfortuanely, I'm a bit twitchy when someone mentions logic, since I had it as a lesson in university.. and I failed, I really didn't like that lesson.
Szahara again 2/3/12 . chapter 4
The quote is from Megatron Origins, right? If it is then I feel so clever now. *pats herself on the shoulder* But I'd rather have some chocolate cake, if you don't mind.

And Decimus sounds like a nice guy, shocking.

"his namesake" You mean Megatronus? That's even more of a shock, what a twist. I wonder where you'll take this. It's very promising, especially if Optimus shows up too. I don't know whether you're planning on this, but I'm crossing my fingers. :)
TsukiyomiNeko 1/17/12 . chapter 3
This chapter was amazing! Like Shattered Origin, I'm loving Shattered Flight!
Prototron MJ Tornada 1/15/12 . chapter 3
Please update soon I really love this style of Shattered Glass!
Schwertlilie81 11/28/11 . chapter 2
This story is a wonderful continuation of your previous one.

The way you keep to the idea of an alternate universe with the reversed roles, but let them evolve their personality all the same is really great.

Cant wait to see more of that!
darkmachines 11/21/11 . chapter 2
Awesome, very cool story, I would like to read more.
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