nice starting...

Hey you! It's me from the HH. :) I absolutely ADORE this! It got me all butterfly-y, which I hadn't felt from a fic for a while. Love your writing!

Mmmm... I don't think you shoul add anything. It is good as a one shot. :)

As usual, great writing! :)

Sorry I missed reviewing this after the contest. To answer the question, yes would like to read your take on Edward and Charlie meeting from this story. This was really good as usual for you. Interesting way to go and yet get to same place. Perhaps a bit more realistic with some sense of self preservation on Bella's part - throw in some confusion and conflicting feelings. Very much in character to them both misunderstanding each other and making wrong assumptions. Good for Alice protecting Bella from Rosalie as much as possible. It's not like Bella can go back to her mother and can't change how she smells.

I think this is a very interesting twist on Twilight.

I enjoyed this immensely. And would definitely be up for more. :)

Thanks for writing.

Simultaneously canon, but imaginative and intriguing. I loved it, thank you.

Yes! Always yes. I'm late in reading this, I'm just catching up on my fic. But I really enjoyed this.

love it. of course I will be interested in reading the meeting between Charlie and Edward. can't wait.

Liked this much more than I thought I would. It makes some kind of sense that their relationship would start out like this. Bella was not any kind of rational person in the Saga. Accepted much too easily for someone who was supposed to be intelligent and mature beyond her years. You've made some very good inroads into what she might have thought and done. Would love to see where you might want to take this.

Hmmm, that was interesting... Didn't seem too dark though - you should've done something like Bella's dream sequence from the book/film... :-)

This looks neat! Thanks for writing! I'd be happy to see it continued. Well done!

I like this re-write it makes more sense. LOL I think it may be better than the original. *grin*

if you could pretty please do that other re-write LOL I would be ever so grateful *grin*

thanks for the read.

Well of course we would like to read more! Whuts wrong witchoo? I enjoyed this very much!

Thanks!