|Reviews for Ororo and T'Challa in Zola|
| Oistasia 3/13/12 . chapter 3
Why am I just now reviewing this? :O
EXCELLENT work, as usual. You've certainly got T'Challa and Ororo's parenting styles down pat, and totally in-character. I think the way they chose to discipline their children was very creative and original, especially taking into consideration the point they were trying to get across. And Storm was on-point, lol... I always imagined that she'd be the stricter of the two parents.
I'm really enjoying Zola's development as an unestablished individual, and the idea of the Ohene Aniwa is absolutely brilliant. I am anticipating Storm's sojourn to Kenya, and what it will entail.
Please keep writing! You give me hope that one day someone will see the amazing potential this couple has when written competently...
Hey, a girl can dream, can't she? :/
| CarbonGoddess 12/6/11 . chapter 2
NWHS you are officially my favorite writer on this site. Please write another story!
| The Sky Ruler 11/28/11 . chapter 3
Love it, more plz !
| CarbonGoddess 11/28/11 . chapter 3
I loved this! This is officially my favorite story! Please write another
| theoriginaldeadpool 11/27/11 . chapter 1
TLDNR, not enough sex
| Oistasia 11/24/11 . chapter 2
I absolutely adored the first chapter; sweet and light, with an edgy side to boot. ;) I really like the concept you're playing with here, too. It gives you the chance to fully develop an unestablished character, and offers a fresh and intriguing viewpoint. Cute indeed... And I love the twins' personalities, too.
I also enjoyed how you introduced Storm's strong leadership skills as well and Zola's profound sense of appreciation for her. Interestingly enough, I expected 'Ro to be a little more strict with her children, particularly because she can use her own positive example to the twin's advantage on how NOT to let their own sense of hurt and vengeance guide the wanton use of their powers. Anywho, I think I'm going to thoroughly enjoy this fic. Not like that's unusual. :P
P.S - I'm sad to see that you plan to end it so soon, because I got to thinking: you know what would fabulously conclude this story? An epilogue 20 years into the future.
Just a thought. :)
Keep up the awesome work!
| CarbonGoddess 11/21/11 . chapter 1
Love this story! Please update soon!
| The Sky Ruler 11/8/11 . chapter 1
woot this is great, already a good start. I just know this is gonna be good. Plzzzzz update soon
| jazphace 11/6/11 . chapter 1
Wow! I'm loving it already :) Lol. Can't wait to read what happens next!