This is makin me wanna cry but its so good!

I like seeing Dak in your guys' fics. no one else really writes about him. I liked the part where James punched Kendall in the jaw. That was really funny and I could easily see that happening in the show. I want to know what their plan is. Great job. Update again soon.

Wow, Dak really has been through a lot. I think it was smart of him to be able to trick his captors into allowing him to wait on them hand and foot. I liked that little bit of humor as well. The boys seemed like themselves for that short moment. Of course they'd pick Logan to fight. But, i thought it was cool that James was teaching them how to box so they can defend themselves

Way to Logan. I just hope he doesn't get hurt too bad. I like how you guys portray Dak. You're right, not a lot of people write about him, but I'm glad you guys do. Great job and update again soon. I want to see what the piece of paper had to with their plan.

very cool chapter!(:

Awww Kendall is forming a plan to escape as is Dak...James seems pretty...vacant of emotion currently...Logan is losing it and poor Carlos is trying his best just to keep Logan from completely falling apart...

UPDATE SOON! :)

Logie.. don't cry, buddy, I don't like seein' any of ya cry...

But I like seeing Logan and Carlos weak... cuz they're cute like that... but I"ll respect whatever you do, girl! :)

Loved the chapter! I'm loving Dak at the moment! :) Update soon!

O.O Update again soon. It's a good thing Dak is there too. This is one of the most original stories I've seen in this fandom. Good job and update again soon

That was great, and i just hope they can escape soon!

I can't wait to see how Dak is going to help them out. Great job with this. I really felt for Logan at the end

Aw, I loved seeing Logan break down though. You write the guys so well. I can't wait to see what their plan is

Update again soon. I have to know what's going to happen next!

I can't believe they have Dak too. I wonder how long he's been there. The descriptions on how they look different made the guys so much more hotter to me. I thought you wrote Mama Knight, Katie, Gustavo, and Kelly well, but it also felt like it was slowing down the story, however, i can see why you wanted it there. Great job as usual.

please update soon

Aw, that's really pretty short :-( you could've written about James', Kendall's and Logie's thoughts too maybe or maybe the nurse bring more...uh...suspicious(sp?) or something like that

And i think it's better if you continue just with Dak and the Boys, i skip the Mama K/Gustavo/Kelly/Katie parts anyways _ xD

Continue soon .