This really was kind of beautiful.

Yeah, that was horrible advice and it doesn't give you anything to improve on. But it was in character and in depth and most definitely Sam and Freddie.

Keep writing. :)

-QuadofAces

This was adorable. :)

Finally another post iOMG fic. I miss that period before iLost My Mind when there was all that speculation. It made for some damn good fanficton.

The stirrings of the epic romance. Even as they begin to realize their mutual attraction, the Sam and freddie romance is full of stops and starts, of surprisingly timid attempts to "test the romantic waters."

It's a little thing, but it work very well: your use of the "xx" to help break the scene, and let the reader know we have had a passgae of time or a significant shift of settiing. That is something far too few writers on here do, and without something like it, the effect is jarring and confusing. So, well done.

Your last line: '"You're kind of a wimp," she laughs, and she's happy.' is a perfect end to this story. Sam is with Freddie, holding his hand, and she is happy.

Great writing

Great job. :)

very, very cute :) I loved this! also very realistic, so amazing job :)

Interesting take on the iOMG aftermath :)

nice job!

I loved this. Ecspecially the boyfriend-girlfriend statement in the beginning and the parallel in the end. Nicely done. One thing though. Shane? :)

The ending was so cute, but there was something in there about her going on a date with Shane that didn't make any sense :P

Love this line:

kind of wants his hand to hold at scary movies (only to comfort him; he's kind of a wimp)

Aw! That was very sweet and very well-written! I loved it! :) The only small problem I noticed was that at the end, Freddie says "Cancel the date with Shane." instead of "Cancel the date with Brad." Just thought I'd let you know.