Love the story, I really hope you come back to it!

Not bad, but it was a little hard to tell who was saying what...And yeah i like the Las Vegas show and fan fiction, but i just can't stand Danny with anyone but Mary! ANYWAY, if you have more ideas about this story then you should definitely do more! Look forward to reading more if you do -

please, continue!

I love this show.

You should finish this. I want to know what happens :)

liked what i saw my vote is to continue

hey the beggining is interresting but its pretty hard to follow if you dont put the inverted commas ...

whats gonna happen ? i wanna know )

its gonna be a Sam/danny paring ? i hope so coz i love them :))

keep on :D