dah awwwwww, this is cute too! but if this goes in a relationship direction it would be a little strange, two guys together, one is 17 and one is 39...

is this story going to be updated? i really want to see another chapter, but i dont' want to be waiting around if it isn't going to be...

so, basically Edward's turned into you - lol, nice fic buddy!

I want more of these two, so very badly. This may be the only Edward fic I've ever liked. You're incredible.

I hope you have more coming.

I have only one thing to say and that is this: "ow, my heart". Seriously, though. This is kind of heartwrenching, in its own simple way.

I love it.

I love this story! I've been searching for ones where Edward or Bella have some doubts about each other, and I'm so glad I found yours. )

Can't wait to read more!

I don't know how to say this properly: this chapter is awesome.

I just cried. Because you just kind of crushed my hopes and there goes happy ending, not that they could have gotten one anyway, and how the heck did you keep them in character and make me like them? Alright I'm rambling, off to read more of your wonderful stories :)

-Charlee

So, Love this. My friend showed me a couple of your previous works so I put you on my author alert and I don't regret it now. I cried when Bella said she wanted a divorce, and now that Caden is back I'm happy. Thanks for writing amazing stories, I don't think any of your stories will ever be boring.

Update? Please? Oh my gosh, am I drooling on your shoes? I am so sorry... It's just that your writing is fantastic and your characters have so much depth to them that I started to blank at the amazingness. Seriously though, I would love an update. :)

charliebrown1234

so much angst. It's fantastic :) I feel so bad for Caden but I also want to know a bit more details about what has happened to him besides just that one flow of consciousness. I hope the boys repair their relationship!

Also:

"I don't want to end up reading two hundred essays comparing Romeo and Juliet to the latest paranormal tween romance. I don't particularly care for Romeo and Juliet, and I care even less for the likes of Melenie Stryder."

Nice.

I really love your style of writing... but as you're breaking my heart, I'm going now to buy some dolls and create my own story, in wich Edward goes to Australia and lives with Caden (sparkling so much that the amount of sunlight and the heat increase and the climate suddenly changes... oh wait.) and they live happily after AND THE END.

No ok, I don't like forced happy endings. I love how you're wrting this fan fiction, and your writing is really good. So, please, update really soon - at least as you can. :D

Ps: my review sounds lame, sorry.

Poor Caden, but yes life does...happen.

I loved this chapter, even the awkward moments. They really are so sweet together and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Poor Caden, but yes life does...happen.

I loved this chapter, even the awkward moments. They really are so sweet together and I can't wait to read the next chapter :)

Oh wow that was such a great start to this sequel :)

I am really not a fan of any fic's with Edward usually but this, its just too perfect and I absolutely fell in love with dear, sweet Edward's personality in this one, (because he actually has one? Yes definitely)

Love that Bella and him are better off divorced and that she's decent now too! (How'd you do that?)

Great first chapter :)

NOOOO CADEN WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU? But twenty years IS a long time... I love all the anti-Twilight bits you have in here. Good job and update soon!