 PrincessLazyPants 3/5/12 . chapter 1I don't know how many times I've read and reread this but I liked how creative it was and how researched it was too! And although we, as readers, had no clue what half of those words meant on their own, you wrote it in a way that would allow us to have a grasp of things while letting the story flow. Great job. (Btw, I'm definitely rereading this again in the future - it's one of my favorites) |