Great Work!:)

This is excellent. Sandoval is my favourite character, and you really did him justice with this fic. If you ever find the time, a sequel along this story line would be equally excellent. Keep up the good work!

Good. I wish there was a second chapter where Liam and Ronald talked and Ronald found out about Liam being his son... But, overall, this was good.

This was very nice.

I like it...really I did.

Only, I would like more...along this storyline.

Like maybe when the truth comes out.

What type of situation would lead to that?

Has their situation gotten better or worse?

Does Sandy try to change his way in any way now that he knows he has a son and desires the unknown son to love him, kinda like ... because I knew you were out there, I tried to become a better man thing...

Later

Good job! Not bad at all for a first fic.

Poor, poor Sandoval, though...