great story can't wait for the other shoe to drop.

great story can't wait for the other shoe to drop.

great story can't wait for the other shoe to drop.

great story can't wait for the other shoe to drop.

I hope you didn't think I was being mean to you in any way. I just wanted to make sure that you knew that that would be statutory rape so you could make the story more realistic. I certainly wasn't implying that you had to make the story work in a certain way if you didn't want it that way. I was only trying to help and hope you didn't take it in an offensive way.

Will this be a Seddie story ?

hey, I have a comment about your format, can you put dialogue from diffrent people in different paragraphs that way we can tell who is talking. IT is really confusing.

It also adds more white space to your writing so that people are able to read it faster. This short chapter shouldn't have taken me 5 minutes to read.

Constructive criticism...

Now a praise

I like where you are going with this. don't condone the rape but I don't really care it is a story. And this is part of life. I wold like to see how they navegate through this whole pregnancy, how she tells Freddie and how he will react. This was before she got with Fred, so he will probably deffinitely forgive her.

Can't wait to see more

your right to syand up for your story girl! its good keep on writin!

when will the next chapter be up?

I can respect a Spencer / Sam (Spam) relationship. Spencer is about the only guy she treats with anything like respect, & there that one-liner from "iGet Pranky."

The statutory rape problem is a gray area as far of Washington state law goes, but it takes more than just the age difference between them for him to be convicted of rape. I did some research on this subject when I was writing Chapter 5 of my book "iLifestyle." I kept Spam as a background story in my series.

If I read this right, she had sex with Spencer, then she & Freddie started dating (i.e. the “Seddie arc”), then figured out she is pregnant?

Freddie will forgive her. He always forgives the girls, no matter what they do to him.

Not sure how Spencer will react.

Carly will overreact. Can you have Creddie as a background story? Carly will need some love & attention, because she will no longer be the center of attention. Sam's baby will be.

Please continue this story.

i liked it because it wasn't what I was expecting. hope you're going to write more.

Interesting. I like spam a lot. I'm wondering how old they are in this because if Sam is under 18, Spencer could go to jail for sex with a minor (ie statutory rape) and that could add an angsty plot twist. ;}

Haha but do the story however you like. I'm just giving suggestions.

Wow, want to read some more please. I like Spam.

I liked it, it's different from what you usually see.