 NickTonyK 5/30/12 . chapter 12Great chapter! Love to have more soon! |
 kathey'ssis 5/30/12 . chapter 12it's been a long time, i've missed you and your stories. this chapter is a real good one but a clif hanger, i hope you don't take too long to let us know what will happen next. |
 Piscean6724 5/30/12 . chapter 12Uh-oh... This doesn't bode well for those young punks does it? Hurry with the updates, please! |
 HeroWorshiper 5/30/12 . chapter 12Good chapter. Looks like maybe real life is cutting you a little slack. Me too finally. Good to begin my reading jag with a new chapter from you.
And... Get 'em boys! Loved that you included the Adam-12 boys. |
 jada951 5/30/12 . chapter 12wow. ok. cliffie!
glad reed and malloy saw these guys.
and poor J., totally whipped. Hope the gang doesn't see him first! |
 Gottahavemyncis 5/30/12 . chapter 12Uh oh, hope Pete & Jim catch the bad kids quickly. And how Johnny of young Johnny to go ahead and clean up, to try and do something to repay Jimbo for his kindness. Looking forward to the next update! |
 Maudlin Mush 5/30/12 . chapter 12oh, wonderful! those thugs just can't leave well enough alone! Now they'll be caught. Love the way you're weaving so many characters into this story. Hopefully Johnny will settle down with Jimbo for awhile and get back to his feet. Thank you for the update. |
 alittlefan 5/30/12 . chapter 12Short but great chapter! I love that he cleaned up, and you have done such a good job portraying Johnny as a boy, that I don't picture the Johnny from the show, just a young sweet boy. That is a really good thing, by the way! It is hard sometimes to see the boy when all you can picture is the man.
I'll be honest, I don't always like the stories about Johnny having a hard childhood-but your way of weaving in characters from the show, in very appropriate ways, makes this story really fun to read. I can't wait to see what you will do next!
Thanks for the update! |
 jerseybelle 5/30/12 . chapter 12Thanks for the update. It's nice to see Pete and Jim in here. |
 Bamboozlepig 5/30/12 . chapter 12Another good update, so cool to see Pete and Jim in this fic, I love their guest appearance! |
 PenguinTKD 5/30/12 . chapter 12Great story line! More chapters Please! :-) |
 inatepaz 5/30/12 . chapter 12Hey Ginger, thanks for posting an update. Please post more, this coming from someone who hasn't updated her own story in forever. Loved the inclusion of Pete and Jim. Candee/inatepaz |
 wendylee 5/30/12 . chapter 12Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh! Another chapter! Off to read, will be back to review. |
 princessesmeralda 5/30/12 . chapter 12MORE! I love your stories! |
 Kelmin 5/30/12 . chapter 12Hey! Great to see another chapter in a great story. I was losing hope for this fandom; can discuss on PM sometime, LOL.
You're showing JOhnny as loyal and industrious, and losing his suspicion, and possibly gaining the ability to trust a little bit, which he'll need to become the character we all know and love so much. Can't wait to see more!
Kel |