UM, OKAY I'VE UP TO DATE ENJOYED THE STORIES YOU WROTE FOR THESE TWO CHARACTERS. BUT, I HAVE TO SAY THE IMAGE OF THEM RIDING ON THE SAME BIKE IS NOT A GOOD ONE TO ME. IT SENT SHIVERS BUT NOT THE GOOD KIND. WHICH IS RATHER UNFORTUNATE, BUT WHAT CAN YOU SAY. YOU CAN'T PLEASE EVERYONE.

BUT STILL, IN EVERY STORY I HAVE EVER READ ON LIVEJOURNAL, ADULTFANFICTION AND THIS ONE. I HAVE NEVER SEEN THEM SO FRIENDLY OR MUSHY WHEN THEY'RE SUPPOSE TO BE THESE TOUGH ALPHA MALES WHO ARE KILLERS IN THEIR OWN RIGHT. VICTOR CREED IS A GUY WHO MURDERS AND VIOLATES FOR THE FUN OF IT, WHERE'S THAT PART OF HIM?

BUT YA, DESPITE WHAT THE UPPER RANT MIGHT HAVE LOOKED LIKE, IT'S NOT A FLAME IT'S JUST ME ON SUGAR. THIS STORY IS A GREAT READ THOUGH. POOR OPRAH JUST ISN'T POPULAR WITH VIOLENT FERAL MUTANTS.

This was very amusing, lol. It's always fun to imagine what the various immortal beings have to think about those who complain about aging. Sabes is always a fave of mine, especially when he is so well written. Nice job. :)