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Mathmel 11/30/11 . chapter 4
Haha, what a cute ending! :)
KJay99 11/28/11 . chapter 4
Yay!

Nice little fic about a little noticed detail. I like it!

(thumbs up.)
Chaimera 11/28/11 . chapter 4
I followed this story from the beginning and I've really enjoyed it. The only note I have is that it felt a bit rushed, particularly the end, which was a bit abrupt. (It's a note I've been on the receiving end of myself which is why I noticed I think)

Other than that, lovely story. Well done.
Soaney1349 11/28/11 . chapter 4
Really enjoyable story, i'm really glad that i read this.
Ryalin 11/28/11 . chapter 4
Well done! Very enjoyable story.
KJay99 11/23/11 . chapter 3
Woo- gang with a plan. Nice.

I'd personally like to see a bit more detail, like faces, reactions, the mood of the room, ect. Build a scene for me. But- I'm enjoying this story and I'm curious to see what happens with poor Mykes.
Ryalin 11/22/11 . chapter 3
Another great chapter! Liked the banter.
TruthBehindTheEyes 11/15/11 . chapter 2
Good stroy so far. I like the idea. Update
KJay99 11/14/11 . chapter 2
So that's what's wrong.

Hm- must really be a bad day- being sucked of viatl fluids and retaining all of that energy. I bet her gall bladder is empty! ;) Jk. I'm sure it's her spleen.

Keep up the good work- see you next Monday!

(Oh- go Leena!)
star jelly 11/14/11 . chapter 2
Poor Myka!

I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens next!
Ryalin 11/14/11 . chapter 2
Another great chapter. It shouldn't come as a surprise that I love the angst. ;)
Christie Redfield 11/14/11 . chapter 2
This is coming together nicely, and I'm loving the concern that Pete showed for Myka, very sweet. :) Also, having Claudia say "Oh pickles!" made me smile. :D Can't wait to read more.
star jelly 11/9/11 . chapter 1
This story is really interesting and I like it! It's only one chaptr and already I cannot wait to see what happens next!
xXBlondie12Xx 11/9/11 . chapter 1
Wow! You've deffo got to keep going with this one!
The Sheep Of Destiny 11/8/11 . chapter 1
Love it! Can't wait or the next chapter!
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