 Mathmel 11/30/11 . chapter 4Haha, what a cute ending! :) |
 KJay99 11/28/11 . chapter 4Yay!
Nice little fic about a little noticed detail. I like it!
(thumbs up.) |
 Chaimera 11/28/11 . chapter 4I followed this story from the beginning and I've really enjoyed it. The only note I have is that it felt a bit rushed, particularly the end, which was a bit abrupt. (It's a note I've been on the receiving end of myself which is why I noticed I think)
Other than that, lovely story. Well done. |
 Soaney1349 11/28/11 . chapter 4Really enjoyable story, i'm really glad that i read this. |
 Ryalin 11/28/11 . chapter 4Well done! Very enjoyable story. |
 KJay99 11/23/11 . chapter 3Woo- gang with a plan. Nice.
I'd personally like to see a bit more detail, like faces, reactions, the mood of the room, ect. Build a scene for me. But- I'm enjoying this story and I'm curious to see what happens with poor Mykes. |
 Ryalin 11/22/11 . chapter 3Another great chapter! Liked the banter. |
 TruthBehindTheEyes 11/15/11 . chapter 2Good stroy so far. I like the idea. Update |
 KJay99 11/14/11 . chapter 2So that's what's wrong.
Hm- must really be a bad day- being sucked of viatl fluids and retaining all of that energy. I bet her gall bladder is empty! ;) Jk. I'm sure it's her spleen.
Keep up the good work- see you next Monday!
(Oh- go Leena!) |
 star jelly 11/14/11 . chapter 2Poor Myka!
I really like this story and can't wait to see what happens next! |
 Ryalin 11/14/11 . chapter 2Another great chapter. It shouldn't come as a surprise that I love the angst. ;) |
 Christie Redfield 11/14/11 . chapter 2This is coming together nicely, and I'm loving the concern that Pete showed for Myka, very sweet. :) Also, having Claudia say "Oh pickles!" made me smile. :D Can't wait to read more. |
 star jelly 11/9/11 . chapter 1This story is really interesting and I like it! It's only one chaptr and already I cannot wait to see what happens next! |
 xXBlondie12Xx 11/9/11 . chapter 1Wow! You've deffo got to keep going with this one! |
 The Sheep Of Destiny 11/8/11 . chapter 1Love it! Can't wait or the next chapter! |