This just gets more and more interesting.

OMG BITCH BETTER BE LYING. FUCK GET THE RAID. LETS ALL SPRAY HER AT ONCE.

Your Jadaar and Asric stories are amazing! And Griftah really shines in this one! I don't know what else to say except that I can't wait to see what the next chapters hold- I'm waiting on the edge of my seat here. :)

No good stinkin mages. So freakin op.

"-a steely-eyed, black-armored, bearded package of death." LOL. Amazing. I love that line to pieces along with the beard itching comment.

I must say that this story is quite cute and interesting, especially when told from the point of view of such an upstanding character being put into the rather shady world of the Darkmoon Faire.

After I read the end of the fourth chapter, I quite literally cried out "Nooooo, not Griftah!" I do hope he's not actually going to die, he's one of my favorite NPC's in the game, and you brought him to life so well.

I hope for an update soon.

Ahhh I love these two! Great story. Made me laugh out loud quite a few times which is rare. Usually I just giggle a bit. Hope to see more.

I'm so love your Asric & Jadaar -