Very good story! I hope you write a sequel?

All good things must come to an end... and what a great ending! :)

Awww... that seemslike the end... What a great story!

BUT DON'T MAKE IT THE END. ITS NOT OFFICIALY THE END. YET.

Aloha! This story is really good so far! i just started reading it and I could hear Linda, Scott and Dan as though this was an episode! I love Aisha too! She's a sweetheart! Jasmine is gonna be an awesome mother someday! I can't wait to read more! I'm glad Aladdin saved Aisha. I wonder if Sadira will be in this. Sadira is my fave char in the TV Series.

AMAZING! I'm a sucker for cheesy romance scenecs. And I also love Aladdin...he's amazing! :) please don't let this story be done! :)

With the alive thing agin. LOLOL

Amazing

(as always)

Omg! This was really good! The long wait for the update was worth it! :D

WHOA!

Please update!

"Yes, I'm alive, he's alive, you're alive." LOL

Your chapter made me remember one of the persons who makes the arrest in the Carmen Sandiego PC games (late 90s version)

*Barges into the palace screaming*

Ooooh an idea! What's Aisha's big idea author? I gotta know what's the big idea!

Jafar: Hew you! What's the big idea! and why are there so many exclamation marks here? I can't even see the room with all those ! marks all over the place!

Besides: You are such a whore for barging in her interfering with my plans and I will keep you as my play toy! *licks lips gleefully*

*Jafar raises his cobra staff to fire a spider web instead Ivan Idea holds out a special ACME mirror which reflects the web back to Jafar.

*Jafar gets tangled and tries to wiggle free but couldn't* Jafar screamed: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Ivanidea steers carpet gently down and says: "Well looks like your web of lies have finally caught up to you...literally!"

"Now you're going to one place lies cannot harm anyone and that about wraps up this case."

The Boss (I forgot her name) phones in:

Oh no! You forgot to make out a warrant and without a warrant you cannot make the arrest! I am truly sorry but Jafar has to be set free by law.

WHAT? NO *beep* WAY! !# $!$# $!

*Jafar smirks in an evil way* Jasmine weeps and Aladdin sighs in despair and the story goes on.

I have an account known as Tetraforce on here but I am not logged in and did I mention Abis Mal is a bumbling *idiot* as they would call him?

Still you've got a fine fic here despite this story being *a bit* rushed at times and I love where this story is going.

Cheers! My pet Xerxes says: Me like story!

First of all:

I read both chapters 1 and 2:

I love your story and how the guard was about to cut off the hand when Prince Aladdin saved the day then gave her food to eat.

Second of all:

The other parts however were very rushed and leaves a lot of room for questions: Such as, what was Aisha's life like as a servant and what's the story behind becoming an adopted princess? Was there a BIG celebration? Why did we suddenly skip to these shadow people without a pause?

Back to the adopted Princess celebration I mentioned:

That would be a VERY big day for her to be an adopted princess and I'd have loved to see her reaction and what they did during the celebration but you just skipped right over it which is a shame. :(

Also:

So far this story only seems to be focused on action which itself isn't a bad thing but in a situation like this there needs to be breather moments. I hope to see some in the coming chapters.

A major problem with movies today that me and my parents both agree on is the pacing of action to the point that during a battle scene you can't tell who's fighting who especially if they switch back and forth characters a lot.

I wonder if that's why this story is rushed since you might be used to modern pacing of movies and I am not.

I love Aisha/Ama. She is such a good girl and always puts other first. I imagine her getting super hurt and then Aladdin and Jasmine mourn and then she wakes up and the spell is worn off and she remembers her other life. I'm excited to see how this story turns out. I've really fallen in love with Aisha/Ama! I'd love to see her in another one of your fits or some episodes rewrites or rewrites of the other movies. A cross over might be fun also! :)

Happy new year!

Excited so update soon!

:)

Awesome story, Lawi01! I can't wait for more!

Awwwww, what a bittersweet ending to a chapter. Great job!