its nice.

that was really great!I can't wait to see what happens next!

It seems interesting till now. But I need more before making a proper judgement, although I don't think it's wrong to do so short chapters if you post them fast enough. BTW, it has nothing to do with the fic, but Julius Caesar phrase was "Veni, Vidi, Vici".

Hehehe! I have m&m's! Now I am nice, coz this is what I am when chocolate and I are finally together again! Ah, sweet M&M's why did you ever leave me? Let's never fight again. Awwww... But now, back to business! claps her hands I must say I quite enjoyed this idea of yours, indubitably! Funny that, I appear to have spelt that correctly. Eh, what..?

It's Ellimist, not Elemist. Interesting.

write more write more! continue it!

I like this. Hope you get some more up soon. You seem like a VERY promising author.

Good luck.

Ya shoulda just waited to put this up when you had more chapters. But I like it so far! but how is the ellimist trapped in human form? is that possible? anyways, it's cute, but should be longer and needs more deteal.(Deatal? Detale? Whatever.)

It's a good start, but as far as I know, there's no such word as 'ammunst', and it's Ellimist! Whatever you do, don't spell the names of the characters wrong. The last paragraph is the weakest. 'Show, don't tell' really applies here. He's just listing what's happened to Earth and the Animorphs. Also, I have a hard time seeing a silk and salt trade. That sounds more like ancient civilizations than the space age. Still, you've got a nice writing style. Post more.