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kindadeadaccount 8/31/07 . chapter 22
Nice story, I would love to read Fractured Futures Trilogy, but I don't know where I can find it. I took a look at your livejournal, but it would take ages to find it there:)
suicide.angel01 7/4/04 . chapter 22
Yeah! New chapter! Although it's a rather short one..

But that's not bad because I actually thought that you had abandoned the story.

A constructives comment? No, I don’t have one. But I would like it if you keep it a BradxSchu among the other pairings.

Sorry, if the little bit of School English I know, is somewhat awkward, but I’m Austrian. _
Gale 7/4/04 . chapter 22
Glad to see an update at last ,even if its too short for much to happen.I was beginning to think you had given up writing all need to update your site soon,I thought you said you had more than 4 parts of Changing Shifts,Id love to read more of that too,I really love Schu and Yoji together even if they're not Schu ,having to hang out with all those noisy friends of his new cousin,my heart wont have to wait as long for the next part but I havent lost interest yet so ...
mangababe 2/18/04 . chapter 21
wow!
hola!
i've read all your 21 chapters in a row and that was really interesting! i hope you go on cause i'm not use seeing yohji that way (will he grow up to be taller that his friends again? you kept his green jade eyes and golden locks and his behavior, that's the most important! _)
anyway, that's cool and appealing, Schu is great and i like Erik! (who's that boy/creature? i didn't read the fic of your friend! is it still on ?)
bonne continuation!
bisous
mangababy
June 12/8/03 . chapter 21
somehow reached a link to this story and just wanna leave a note that it's wonderful! will check back often for the next update!
Kitsune no takai 7/30/03 . chapter 21
Hey! I've just finishing reading what you have on this fic and it is pretty good! I wasn't nearly as thrilled with the 'Fractured Futures Trilogy' as I am with this (Yohji's alive here!) Keep writing and update soon!
Gale 6/17/03 . chapter 21
This is a great chapter ,things are starting to happen,Ken and Aya are there,they know where Erik is ,Yoji telepathic,love the way he knocked Schu unconscious(Brad should have warned him hes a bit slow with the warnings in this chapter must be all the stress}This chapter was worth waiting for as will be the rest Im sure.
Gale 6/6/03 . chapter 20
I was just getting ready to email you and see if you were updating anytime soon and here it is ,I hope theres more doesnt seem too worried about Erik does he remember him at all?
ChibiNani 2/23/03 . chapter 19
You're still teasing your fans, Kiki*.*

Don't make us wait so long. The suspence is killing me;_;.
Gale 2/20/03 . chapter 19
Ok Schu seems to genuinely like Yoji but I havnt noticed Yoji starting to show if he likes him back(unless you count the jumping onto him and crying after the Brad incident\.Id like to know if he does yet or if he,s just kinda growing on him as time goes you dont mind a silly question ,how long is Yojis hair,and how long has it been since the beginning of this story ,a couple of days,week ever I look forward to next chapter
Yanagi-sen 2/19/03 . chapter 19
I know where you live. course, it's much easier to harrass you over the IM. Poor Yotan. you are going to get him some assistance with his poor vision soon, ne? As a fellow, 'blind as a bat without corrective lenses' person, I can understand his problem. _
ChibiNani 1/27/03 . chapter 18
Konnichiwa, Kiki. It's me (you know who)I read the rest of New Dawn of (duh) and the reviews. It must be nice to have fans. Don't tease them to much with the practically-a-lemon-scene-cut-short-by-brad thing.

Sloat's involved in something more sinister, isn't he? Will he take advantage of poor Noir?

What do Aya and Ken think is going on? dime por favor. I'm only una pobre leyente sin nada que hacer that knows where you live in case you stop abruptly.
me 1/12/03 . chapter 18
This is great! Please write more as soon as possible! .
Gale 1/11/03 . chapter 18
God I love this story it keeps getting better,Love Schu with Yoji even if he only stays protective of him its still wasnt very nice but hes under a lot of pressure and can be forgiven as long as he makes it up to Yoji later
Kasra 1/10/03 . chapter 18
I just stumbled across this today when I was looking around at the WK fic listings. I glanced at chapter 1, got curious, and ended up sitting down and reading everything you've posted to date. _

Since I haven't read the previous fics, I was a little lost about some of the background and a few of the characters. Are they posted anywhere online that I can read them? Still, even with that limitation, I still really enjoyed what you've got so far. I'm intrigued by Yohji/Jason, and I love watching Schu interact with Yohji and Omi. I'll put my vote in for Schu/Yohji/Omi as well _

Anyhow, I really like what you've got so far, and I look forward to reading future chapters.
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