|Reviews for Metamorphosis of the Soul|
| RJCA27 1/13/13 . chapter 12
UPDATE ALREADY! ive been waiting for months!
| great northern one 8/11/12 . chapter 11
| LokFan 7/26/12 . chapter 11
Okay i managed to read all the story so far and here is my thoughts-THIS STORY IS THE BOMB DIGGITY! Update soon
| NaruSaku.Cha 7/7/12 . chapter 1
Okay, so I didn't read this, but I wanted to point out that you gave this a T rating and then put in the description that it was rated M. You might want to fix the rating so it will be filtered in/out.
| VividDreamer624 4/24/12 . chapter 10
While I love your story this chapter seems very rushed. I wished you would have taken your time and let the readers really get to know how much Azula has changed and what this release means to her. For instance is she nervous about the events? Is she nervous about seeing the Gaang the very people she scorned. I also agree with the reviewer before me, twelve years is way too long to be commited to a mental facility unless your Ozai or someone who is so far gone they can't take care of their basic needs.
I'm still loving the concept and hope to read what's next.
| TurquoiseHeart15 4/23/12 . chapter 10
Eep! Hurray! I love Azula so muh now! She still Azula but way super nice and not totally crazy with domination :D update SOON! Omg. This story is so good. I hope they have a coming home party _ parties are always a good time. And i reallyyyy hope The Gaang and Azula can come to good terms. I know what she did to them and all but she awesome now :) well, ill be watching for a new chapter of this amazingly fantastic story! Keep up the wonderful writing!
Love and Hugs,
| Attila1987 4/23/12 . chapter 10
A nice and fluffy story!
There is still one thing that bother me, and greatly, it's about the time skip : it's just TOO HUGE!
I don't know if you noticed, but back in chapter 7 after Ursa's visit everyone was claiming that with the huge steps Azula was doing, it wouldn't be long before her release, and she gets to be released TWELVE YEARS after! To stay more that a decade in a mental facility(where you're not free of your movement I recall) someone has to be a raging homicidal or suicidal maniac, and while Azula was a little of that at first, it was only during the first months!
And the main problem is that it also affect the rest of the relationships : Azula and Hao are dating, and obviously even had intercourse, during the past 12 years, and yet Hao isn't ready to come in contact with the things in her bathroom. Same thing with Cheng and Ursa : it's been 12 years they are interested in one each other, they're both middle-aged, with 12 more years it means that they relationship is still in the "dating" phase when they are both probably in their fifties.
It's just a little detail, but it shatter the "suspension of disbelief", I think, it's just my opinion of course, that you should reduce significantly the length of the time-skip, putting it in two years, four at maximum. I'm well aware that this changes will have to make you change somethings, mostly about Emi and Ryo's ages, but I thing it would be for the best.
Then again, it's just my humble opinion, take it as you wish!
| Revolation 4/14/12 . chapter 1
I'm liking the dialogue with Azula along with her thought process
| VividDreamer624 4/3/12 . chapter 1
Yay marriage for Azula this is going to be good. there should be more reviews but who cares. I'm once again happy to see a story about Azula being redeemed. Can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve.
| Kimjuni2 2/28/12 . chapter 8
aww so lovely,
| RyoMoonFang 1/18/12 . chapter 6
The Emotion (QAQ) Gahh! I love this fanfic Its all about Emotion you made Azula change while still keeping her intact :) Will be hungrily waiting for more chappy's :D.
| Kimjuni2 1/14/12 . chapter 6
i love it,great job
| VividDreamer624 11/18/11 . chapter 3
Aww Azula has a case of the butterflies how adorable. It's going to be hard gaining her trust. I hope to know more of your interpretation of her past memories. Good stuff. Check your grammar but otherwise good read.
| VividDreamer624 11/16/11 . chapter 2
There are a lot of Azula redemption fics including yours truly(shameless plug). Yours stands out with the idea of the perspectives from the doctor. I really like it. Please don't stop you have potential.
| Jarjaxle 11/14/11 . chapter 1
Interesting. There Are Too few Good Azula Recovery and redemption Stories in my opnion. i have somewhat good expection of this story. plz update soon as possible.