Very descriptive. I got caught into the story quickly. Really no suggestions! :)

Ah, but Gary-Stus are no fun in relationships Rio! They are so perfect they annoy you to death! Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

Heh. Can I give another character? he uses a Lost art, a power from before the Celestials. He wields the ancient power of the Earth Guardian, Izanagi. Of course, he can't use it to the full power, as he is not Izanagi.

Allow me to introduce him. his name is Roku. he has Rusted crimson hair with light blue highlights, deep Blue eyes, and thin eyebrows. He wears a deep blue and silver Samurai's Hakama and Haori with the sleeves rolled up to the shoulders, and he carries a beautiful Odachi(samurai greatsword) with an Eight-point star as a tsuba. his animal form is a red wolf with light blue markings, and his divine weapon is always either a Katana, an Odachi, or a chain.

his power is to manipulate earth, to split the sea, to cut the intangible, and to call forth Geysers of lava. he can't do everything Izanagi could do, but he can do a bit.

do you want to use Horo? because he is the last in a long line of noble dragons serving the sun goddess.

Awesome. do you already have a love interest for Rio, or can I give you someone?

His name is Horo Coron. He is the 16th Great dragon king, and he was just recently Crowned as such. he regularly takes either the form of a human, or that of his favorite type of Dragon, the Lupine drake(very furry, but very Fiery! actually, the Lupine drake is so much like a wolf that is is called the Fire Wolf.) he has long spiky brown hair, multicolor eyes, and a small tattoo on his hand of a wolf and a dragon in a yin yang orientation. He wears a white muscle shirt with blue dragovian markings shining through from his body(his body is covered in markings not unlike those Amaterasu has), but his thick and poofy leather pants cover those. he wears no shoes, but he keeps his feet safe by coating them in scales. He wields a Circle Cross sword(the Crucifix blade) and he can split it in half and curve it for dual katanas.

his shield has a dragon etched into it, and he has great respect for Amaterasu. And, by the way, He's 16. Can you use him, or do you want to use someone else?

I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner! This chapter is just as good as the first, and-

Haruka: Rio thinks Issun is a doll! *Points at Issun* Deal with it, pervert poncle!

Issun: I must be a handsome doll, or she would never have thought that.

*Shoves OC and Issun out of review* Anyways... great job on this chapter. Let's hope things get better for Rio next time! -Storm of Roses

Awesome.

Brush God children are a lively bunch eh? Rio got semi-healed, insulted, hit on, and height-sick in the same chapter! That's got to be a record breaker somewhere! Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like this, my only question is: where's the rest?

I'm really kind of curious about Rio now..,Going to check out your other story now!

A great start to a great story. I cannot wait for more!

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So keep typing and posting cause' it's WONDERFUL!

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I absolutely love your story! You are my most favorite fan fiction author EVER! Do not stop writing! I MUST know what comes next! Nothing to criticize here!

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I'm liking this already. Rio is an interesting character, and I'm excited to see what happens next. Update soon!