I agree with this,i loved Drawn To Life actually felt like i was in the game at times,but when i beat DTL 2:The Next Chapter my heart broke and i cried,thats rare for me to do and i wish the ending was diffrent,i wanted everyone to still be alive,and i had a sort of dislike for the creator at the end,anyway great one-shot!

This is the sort of thing I wished would happen,a sentimental but happy ending. I loved your writing style and I look forward to your next story.

Oh! This is my third time reading it! Great fic!

Omg I wish this happened too lol! That would have been so much better lol :)

The ending of The Next Chapter was a confusing mess of plot that made the actual (extremely simple) story more confusing that it needed to be. Why did they destroy the world to save one person? Why did the Creator mysteriously want this? Why couldn't we choose to team up with Wilfre? Because that's what I damn wanted to do.

Still this little one shot is very good and well written, if a short one.