Wonderful story! I loved how everyone was in character and everything happened so plausibly. I'm just sorry I didn't find your story sooner. Hope you write some more!

Now that I've seen it finished, I have to say... You have some really fine talent put into this. Future stories, definite, yes?

Just read the first chapter- liked very much! Look forward to reading the rest later (expect to see me here again soon!)... That Gray still annoys the heck out of me, though...

Oh hey, thanks for being the first person to review one of my stories... glad you found it funny!

It took me two sittings to finish this chapter, 'tis long.

Good though. Very good. very very ... you get the point, I'm sure.

Thanks for the positive reviews, people! I really appreciate it. I do think that sometimes I tend to slightly overdo it with the details, but hey, I can't help it, lol. This story, an extension of the movie, is pretty much concluded; the next and final short chapter will tie up loose ends. Then I will take a short break while I scheme up the plot for the next story I have in mind (rubs hands together evilly...bwahahahee! One hint: there may be some cross-over stuff involved!) Meanwhile, I will continue to read the excellent stories that you are writing, and glean inspiration. Perhaps I can collaborate on a FF:TSW story w/someone?

Oooh... Is that a hint of JaNeil I detect at the end there? Great chapter. You have a wonder writing style, and I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Or is this the end? Your AN hints at an epilog, but the end of the story says "To Be Continued..."

Yay for the Deep Eyes! Now just bring back Ryan and I'll be happy. *Giggles* World's in danger? Universe blew up? Who cares as long as Ryan's okay.

Another well written chapter. This is a great story. I can't wait to see if there is something special about this mysterious three percent...

YAY! hes ok! yay write more RIGHT NOW! ok

I like psuedo-scientific methods of reviving characters. *Threatens the writer with a spoon* keep going, you...

This is good, very well written. Why isn't anyone else reading it?

Excellent! I can't wait to see if everything works out fine. I hope the Deep Eyes are brought back!

This is good! I can't wait for the next part! Please continue.