So I've been reading various stories of yours all day, pretty much without ceasing, and I finally had to stop and review. Your writing is fantastic- plots, characters, setting, everything. You're also one of the very few writers who can pull off OCs as central characters without making me wince.

Also, I have a question. Is Lecter's Dr. Brussel alias in reference to the profiler who allegedly predicted that the Mad Bomber would be wearing a double-breasted suit when caught? If you did mention that and I missed it, I apologize; I've come across the name three times today already so things may be running together.

-Emily

So it IS the book. Neat.

MOVIE canon, not book. FIX THAT!

Sorry; I'm something of a nitpicker, expecially when it comes to H. L.. After all, HE never makes mistakes, does he? no, he doesn't. And I want to be just like him! (LOL) ;) I love Hannibal. He's a COOL guy-oh, wait, he never says 'cool'. But still, he's cool.

P.S. Is there going to be any violence? I love violence!

I loved this... sequel?

Must be!

I liked Pete's little "hail May" thingy... and the way the GD intervened...

i need coffee!

ciao

Fish

I saved this one for last..and for my patience I was rewarded with two wonderful chapters... I really should try this patience thing more often...hmm

Nice death scene...religious concepts always make it fun. Bring on the second half, i say.

Way to go Sam. Very nice story indeed.

You left it way open for a sequel, good girl!

I agree with Kurt, especially about the Hail Mary's, that was great! Thanks again Sam, for another good one!

Steel-

Aww...she quit! Can't say I blame her. But is the GD really trading Clarice in on a younger model? Tell us soon in the sequel.

Aww..wait, I thought Pete was supposed to suffer some more. But a very nice death scene. Lecter counterpointing the Hail Mary, very cool. And the image of Lecter in the spotlight is very nice.

TWO THUMBS UP! Lindsey's gonna get it? Butt good?

Well look who finally remembered her story! I was hoping you'd get back to this one.

Now I hope you're not going to make me wait too long for some more!

Good Chapter Sam. Keep it up!

Flashbacks, Clarice gets shot, and Lindsey gets...something. Probably worse, I have a feeling, Lindsey's been the designated whipping girl on this romp. Very nice. Glad I could help. Looking forward to future chapters (ahem coff coff nudge).

Uh oh... doesn't sound good for Lindsey. very very nice, Sam. Do post more soon!

S

the thig ... hehe Why on earth would he need a grill rod thought he had a gun good chapter plot thickens...

Yet another great chapter Sam...

So, the GD has to come tend to Clarice now right? While lindsay is off catching the big bad? right? please? lol

Post soooooooonnnnnn!

Left hangin again. I know I'm gettin set up for a fall, but I love it anyway!