great start im really liking it, and i hope nothing bad happends, cause its kinda scary reading "before its too late" cant wait for the next update

Goodness Bella, you are so good with words! I am so curious on where you are taking this! And i love how you bring britney as being secret friends with Rachel! :-D

This story is cute.. I love that she is writing a letter to Quinn telling her what happened and how she felt in the past.. but I am confused as to what is happening in the present haha.. why wouldnt Quinn want Rachel in the room while the baby was born? and what the hell does 'before it as too late' mean! is Quinn dying? now I am all nervous haha.. please update soon!

(great writing though lol)

how cute Rachel, Brittany which is short for Brittany and Santana are friends ;) future Quinn and Rachel are having a girl! HAZAA

Great start. Love that Santana Brittany and Rachel are friends, and the whole zoo thing was funny. And love that Rachel and Quinn are having a baby, but what do you mean "before it was too late". I hope nothing wrong is going to happen. Look forward to the next part.

Me gusta mucho, but you knew that already. Keep writing, and I can always beta if you want me to. :)

Side note, I love you for recommending me - you just made my day. You typo'd my username, though. xD

:)

Interesting start. I must say, the whole 'Rachel the Explorer' line is pretty cute. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

Bellaaa. This is absolutely adorable - Adventurer!Rachel is so cute. And I'm secretly a sucker for some Rucy.

Oh, and I totally pimped this fic out. Promotional advertising, yay. Anyway, keep writing, cause you're a boss. Well, keep writing when your laptop stops acting stupid.

wow this is interesting.. I am a little confused but I suspect that was the point.. One question though.. are you writing this as if Rachel is telling a story to Quinn?

cant wait to read more!

Oh my, soooo cute. More, more please.

iii that was cute minues Lucy's sister she is a bitch

Bella, first of all. I loves you! :D And thank you for the shout out at the end!

I thought this was very adorable! I really liked how you were able to perfectly describe how excited she is. I could honestly picture it and it was how I would imagine a younger Rachel Berry.

I really enjoyed the part where she was climbing on her father, I used to do that when I was a kid and yeah, I can be a tad nostalgic at times! :D

And OH how Lucy was defending her against her sister! I liked how you brought her older sister in a believable sense. But yes... I loved every second of this, you made a sick girl happy today! OH and I must get my flailing in as well! ;lakjsd;lfajs;dlfkjasfd ;)

Can't wait to read the next part! :)

This is beautiful. I registered a few grammar/spelling errors but it wasn't too noticeable and it's only because I'm a grammar nazi. This is the cutest story, omg. I'm going to go cry now.

not really.

but honestly, so good.

Lahv you Bella. :3

So good already, I can tell this fic will be fantastic! Can't wait to see how the story progresses :)