So cute! :)

Very sweet

Aww...

Short but sweet. Nicely done :)

Cute idea! :)

I believe you could go over some lines and smooth them over a little; you know, make the execution flow more naturally from line to line, and paragragh to paragraph. For example, in the beginning when she's wondering who she'll talk to, you go:

"She wondered. He seemed. She decided." ...sort of in a chopchopchop manner, lol :P

Otherwise, I thought her interaction with BC was adorabz :D my fave part by far was the whole: *winkwink* show him your sexy moves at practice *winkwink*

Teehee, it was SO troll!Dinah I died.