very nice! Love the ending shot at Marcus :)

*howling with uncontrolled laughter*

Thank you for absolutely making my day with that bit of hilarious delight. When I can hear every word said as if by the actors, it is nothing less than bliss. And the last line is WONDERFUL!

Michelle

aka

Samuraiko

Very funny! Just the right comic tone. The others are right-I could definitely see this being on an episode! The characterizations were perfect. Thanks!

"I wonder if it will work on Marcus" *laughs*

As you may be able to tell, I enjoyed this one, hehehe..

_ Thank you.

Very good! I really enjoyed reading this. I thought you got the characterizations just right, and the tone was correct for B5. This could easily have been a subplot of an episode.

Thanks for putting it up!

Pretty darn funny! Thanks!

This was GOOD and very funny, made me laugh & laugh! Please write more!

and you say I have a good imagination. and your other story anything new on the horizon?

oh, thank you. i've read it 3 times and i still crack up laughing each time. wonderful. more, soon, please

First of all, this was so funny my screen was splitting!

Secondly, there's more? COOL!

Thirdly, (guess what I'm gonna say next) Marcus! Drrrooooooolllll (sorry, couldn't resist!)

More please

HA, ha, ha, this is funny! Please continue writing stories like this!