OK, you have me definitely hooked on this story.

Very enjoyable!

Update soon.

TDH

Your welcome ,

Yaaay official first chapter LET ME TAKE A BOW TO SHARE THE MOMENT ! Okaj moment shared. Awesome first chapter can't wait for the next one update soon kej?

Great story so far i'm realy looking forward to the next chapter! I realy liked how you made yami Bakura beat Ryou up!Lol poor guy... CONTINUE!

Lol. Cool. Nice. XD oh no! Ryou! Bad (sexy) Bakura! AWWWW! X3 oh dear. Marik was checking her out Hm? :3

... She seems almost... obsessive with someone beating Kaiba... It's rather... creepy. Also I guess you've never watched Season 0. *sighs* Ryou does have a backbone. It just isn't shown in the anime... I'm not sure about the manga. Anyways, while her harping about beating Kaiba was amusing it got a little annoying very quickly. I would suggest toning that back as it seems that she is crazy... and I mean that she's crazier than she almost should be... like Yami Marik scary. As for the 'murder' (there was a lot more blood in the manga) of Ryou, nicely done. Although I'm surprised she didn't warn the others about how Yami Bakura has a plan. Anyways, other than the scary/annoying obsession with Kaiba getting an ego bust it was good.

-d101

OH YAY YOU POSTED A YGO FIC!

Sorry but I am really excited about this.

Update soon. This prologue was interesting.

TDH

Wow. AWWWW! Lol. She's a little bossy and stuff. -_-" XD cool! Awesome! Awww! So sweet!

lovin the story! update soon please!

Interesting. I'm not so sure I like your OC though. I think part of the problem is that she got Yugi into trouble and that just grates with me. Also I guess I'm just waiting to see how she turns out. Although the moping after the loss to Kaiba was interesting. I almost thought she would challenge him to a rematch. In any case, please update soon!

-d101