That was the best mpreg story about Carlos and Kendall...EVER!
Oh Man! I love how you put Dak and Camille together and I like what you called Carlos's 'special ability'
Soooo Loooking forwards to the sequel

Love it!

I love you :D

You have the Jonas brothers plus btr :D

OH MY LORD I FREAKING LOVED THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO FREAKING MUCH! I WAS LISTENING TO COUNT ON YOU WHILE READING THE LAST CHAPTER AND I WAS BALLING MY FREAKING EYES OUT! :'D

OOOOOOOMYYYYYYGOOOOSHHHHHHHH HHH! I LUVED EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER !

this should be a fucking book! BRAVO BRAVO!

lol that last part of the chapter was funny and i hope kendall doesnt become possevsive or a douche

That's quite a satisfying ending. I thought that the story was smooth sailing from the part Carlos found out he's pregnant. So I thought the story kinda went downhill from there. Sorry. Maybe you could've used Bruce to try give a miscarriage to Carlos after what the latter did to him that is beating him to a pulp. Or Jo trying to pull of smtg cheap. Or maybe she collaborated with Bruce. My favorite part of the story is when Carlos wore blue things to entice Kendall and was parading with it in sch and attracted Bruce and almost got raped by him! It was really full of tension and I was srsly breathing rapidly. The story would be better with more tension and drama but still having everything to be all right in the end.
And abt the summary of this story, when I first read the story it gave me the false impression that Kendall abused Carlos in the past and was forced to become boyfriends with Carlos by unknown circumstances and abused him further by raping him. Then he felt in love with him blah blah. It's just suggestion but maybe you can change to this "After one last bullying incident, Kendall admitted his love to Carlos and they became instant boyfriends. What they didn't count on is for their lives to be changed drastically over the course of high school. AU M-preg
Anyway, I can't wait for the sequel! :D the involvement of CIA really Shocked me. Hope their lives won't be threatened!

Whaaaaaaaaaaaat wow um crazy but can't wait it was so awesome I loved it

Um hello Carlos not pulling through is not good that must be ratified like NOW!

Oh how wonderful! Kendall proposed to Carlos! :D And the rings you chose are beautiful! I'm glad you didn't add the smut cos to me, it'd be redundant! No offense!

Nah Mr Garcia's reasoning was okay. Even though I was like 'what...' at first but I agree that we do unthinkable things based on our emotions. Anyway, the haunted mansion part was fun to read! It sounded as if it has been experienced first-hand! And it's hilarious how Logan would be the first one to run away and also quite sweet how Carlos would be holding tight to Kendall. I guess Carlos become a MJ on his own.:)

Aww i just find it too sweet that Kendall sang a song to Carlos! And Mini really dislikes Kenny! Heheh! I don't know if I'm giving the right reaction but i found it funny when Mr Garcia was freaking out over the sonogram.

Yeah I thought the kitten thing was quite random but I guess it was quite relevant since it kinda helped Carlos on preparing to take care of a real baby. :)

0.o no wonder the smut came out of nowhere! Not to sound like a hater but I think the chapter would be better without the smut. It's hilarious abt Carlos' parents fkin each other and the part with the overly enthusiastic doctor. Haha the funny things that happen to Carlos...apart from the baby bump. I wonder how the others would react?