I liked reading your fanfic. Short, BUT the way you described Kid and Serge was truely beautiful.

I quite enjoyed the end.

I must admit, this is quite the story. I like the way you toed up to the line with the details, though, without quite crossing it. Very well-played, in my book.

I can't help but wonder, though, whether Leena or Kid was supposed to be the Canonical pairing for Serge... and what Leena would do to Serge if she were to find out about what happened on Sky Dragon Isle. Poor Serge...