|Reviews for Reverberation|
| BLURGHETY 4/11/12 . chapter 7
DON'T LET IT BE OVER asdfhjkl
Please write more! I'll LOVE YOU.
| Stargazer1364 1/11/12 . chapter 7
This is a very comical story so far, and I'd love to see how you work this. :) Oh, and one more thing. In the chapters, you kind of repeat yourself, and sometimes I get confused as to who is speaking. Like, with the dialogue, sometimes you would use "I said" for both of them even though it's Sora's or Ella's POV. I just had to say that. TTYL! Looking forward to the next post!
| LynxbyLynx 1/4/12 . chapter 7
This is interesting and charming...I think ill read updates onit
| Guest 12/3/11 . chapter 7
woo they finally arrived and are stuck
traveling with zuko that should be fun CX
| Guest 11/28/11 . chapter 6
woo they are finally in the avatar world woop !
| LittleCatZ 11/25/11 . chapter 6
Nice, I can't wait!
| WeAreTheOutsiders 11/21/11 . chapter 5
You're doing a fantastic job.I especially loved the ending can't wait to read more.
| Guest 11/21/11 . chapter 5
lol i love this story its so funny XD .om glad im reading it hope you update soon :D
| LittleCatZ 11/19/11 . chapter 4
I'm reading, and you're doing an awesome job!
| LittleCatZ 11/15/11 . chapter 2
Lol. I love this. Why? It was chosen. Why did I chose it? It was chosen. Why am I reading this instead of studying for physics? It was chosen. xD Awesome story, I love it! I hope you update soon!
| Atomic-Kaori 11/14/11 . chapter 2
chapter 2 was so funny!
| WeAreTheOutsiders 11/14/11 . chapter 2
Great chapter, it made me laugh really update soon.
| RennyyRenn 11/13/11 . chapter 2
"What is our purpose?" I tried again.
"You will learn,"
"Why you are Chosen,"
"But why are we Chosen?"
"You are Chosen."
"For Christ sake!"
"Jesus has nothing to do with this,"
That was a great chapter.
Only one thing I noticed. You keep saying span around. It doesn't really make sense to me. Shouldn't you say spun around?
I don't know, maybe its just me.
| kage kitsune 14 11/12/11 . chapter 1
It's an interesting start. In the first sentence you might want to change "ever to be lived." to "ever to live." and you repeated "After that, we fell asleep in the middle of the film, but I dreamed off the ghosty woman fading into our room, she held out her hand and my dream self took it." twice. Other then that its a great start.
| BmD-XIII 11/11/11 . chapter 1
Lol. Love the intro. But mkjhvcgjbvjg crazy woman