I fell in love with this story. I just hope you find some cure or help for the people...like an intra veinis patrons potion or something to cure those bitten...

"We'll join you soon. should be "We'll join you soon."

Story looks very interesting! Can't wait to read more when I've got the time. Love the Zombie Crossover, I just hope you don't limit magic too much. :-o)

I initially had some trouble adjusting to the fanfiction, but got invested enough later on to be surprised by the Malfoy twists, except for the last one.
I hated you for killing Astoria and making Juliet kill Nott, but that probably means you did a good job ;-)

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A bloody fucking good story, as dark as I like them !

Really realistic characters, good scenario, surprising developpments, a bit of romance, lots of action, a good ending, neither too bright, nor too dark.

I don't know what to think : on one side I'd really like a sequel, but on the other, I can't see what there would remain to say, apart from a little war against the Dementors. All in all, I suppose it's best to let this like that.

Thank you for having shared this story, and good luck for the spin-offs,

Goten Askil, a French reader

This's without a doubt one of the most well-written hp fiction in the existence. You should follow in the footsteps of Joe and make a book of your own, if you're already not doing such a thing already.

All I can say is that this fic deserves more review and favs count than it received.

This is a great chapter-action, intrigue, drama. It's all there. Kudos for this tightly-written masterpiece.

I liked this story a lot. It was well written and well thought out. It kept me interested and guessing at bits the entire way. I liked that Harry told the story of what happened at St. Mungos, and the fall out from that event. I like the idea of seeing more of what happened in the year between the fall of everything, and the beginning of this story.

You captured the canon characters well, and made the others come to life. It made you root for them, and work at figuring out just what was going on in the story, and who was doing what. I suspected Nott was the catalyst for the dementors, but did not guess that they were already there in the necklace. Interesting take on it. Glad that Malfoy was his own undoing, but saddened to see Astoria die senselessly. I wondered if that might happen with Ellie getting closer to Harry, even if he didn't return her feelings.

Epilogue was nice with the closure, and the hope for the future.

I was a little skeptical as to how the zombies gave the wizards much trouble in the beginning but the revelation that the dementors were the cause helped with that. Can't wait to read more.

Well, it was a great story. I'm not happy that Fortess is dead and I'll always be pissed off about having Astoria killed off, almost made me quit reading this story. I'll have to check out the sequel.

HP-DG-SB

I cried! That is the first in a long while that I actually cried from reading a story. This was well done.

you should post a sequel to this story, it's well written

It's all working out a bit too perfectly... the web of lies and deceit isn't as big as it's portrayed, Harry overreacts to some things, underreacts to other, the information given doesn't line up proportionally with reactions, and in the end, the reader is the one with the right of it, watching helplessly as Harry keeps playing by the rules for the first time in his life, instead of being the man of action he always was. He's turned into the underdog at every opportunity, simply because it has to be so. He's filling a role, nothing more.

It just seems like there's way too much pussyfooting around, and the brief glimpses of action don't really do enough. There hasn't been a real plot twist yet. Everything just makes too much sense with the way it's written, it's too logical, too by-the-numbers, too much causality. It's just the same old 'everyone knows the purebloods did it, but we can't actually do anything about it'. Everyone is a victim of the system, except for the people that it's meant to protect against.

I don't know why, but I was reading Fortess's name as Fortress. It sounds better.

You write a good crazy person.