Err... Is the mental issue post traumatic stress disorder or schizophrenia? I wanna cookie. D:

:D No problem. I'm starting to notice how insane Brooke is going... o. o Dang. Hallucinations? Holy crap, poor girl. And hearing voices too. She's going insane! That's my job! D:

Otherwise, epic chapter. It was admittedly kinda short, but I can live with that. By the way, if Mooshu's coming next, I know what's gonna happen. o. o

Very emotional chapter, and very interesting chapter title. I think this story is a whole power dump of emotions so far, and am enjoying it. Donna's death was pretty sad for me; somehow that character reminds me a lot of my sister. Lord knows that girl could walk into a room full of strangers and make friends with everyone there in less than ten minutes.

Awaiting an update!
-LEO130

Aww...so sad :,(

Cue the depression :P I loved the first line though! And the journal entries were a good way to give different points of view. Can't wait for the next update! :D

-scarletfireblaze

Oh no. Here comes depression T.T

I am always correct! -slapped-

AWww... But Sloths are awesome! XD

I believe Brooke's mental changes are quite visible, and well described. Good work with that. :) Continue, and I look forward to le next update!

Um...is Brooke going crazy? I DON'T KNOW! I feel like it's obvious, but I don't know whether or not her "mental changes" means that she's losing her sanity...yeah, I guess no cookies for me :(

Cookies aside, this chapter was really packed with emotion. I'm trying to get my brother to make a Fanfiction account, but I've already made him read most of your W101 fanfictions and he says they're awesome! Keep up the great writing!

Helephants. -grimace-

Donna is literally one out of three NICE Pyromancers I've heard of or met.

And now she's gonna die! I think...

I am a SLOTHY.

Did ya get a Sloth when they came out? I did. XD

Interesting...

:D Yeah, nice chapter! I like the idea of the journal, and that Private Sweeney got showed up by a girl. Too bad I can't go to Cyclops Lane, since I play the game for free...bleh. :P

Eh, who cares about me? You're an awesome writer and your stories are amazing! :)

-scarletfireblaze

-sniffles- I'm not crying...

Emma: Yea, she is. :)

Keira: Yup!

BUT IT'S SO SAD! BROOKE! WHY?! AND THEN YOU -spoilers-

GAAAAAAAHHHHHH YOUR STORIES STILL DRIVE ME TO INSANITG WITH THEIR EPICNESS!

JSDJWJHEYWAJWKEJWJSNWNENWJSJ WKWKK AWESOME.

Continue, please! Sorry for my spazz. XD

Tragedy strikes, and the adventure begins...

I like it. And:::
OOHH! This is before the present day wizard101 time! I JUST noticed that now XDXDXD

Ooh, I like this chapter! :D
I do have a question, though. In the fourth chapter, it said that msot people were bullies in Ravenwood. Is that what you meant? I'd actually think that there are only a few school bullies, and than other people might just avoid her, not particularly friendly but not really mean either.
But whatever you meant, I still really loved the chapter. I can't wait to see if Brooke ever does get over her fire fear.
Waiting for "le action" XD.
-scarletfireblaze

*fanboy squeal* EVAN AND BROOKE FOREVER!