|Reviews for Tempest Flame: Tale of the Swiftriver|
| NightSkyWolves 5/14/13 . chapter 15
Err... Is the mental issue post traumatic stress disorder or schizophrenia? I wanna cookie. D:
:D No problem. I'm starting to notice how insane Brooke is going... o. o Dang. Hallucinations? Holy crap, poor girl. And hearing voices too. She's going insane! That's my job! D:
Otherwise, epic chapter. It was admittedly kinda short, but I can live with that. By the way, if Mooshu's coming next, I know what's gonna happen. o. o
| LEO130 5/15/13 . chapter 15
Very emotional chapter, and very interesting chapter title. I think this story is a whole power dump of emotions so far, and am enjoying it. Donna's death was pretty sad for me; somehow that character reminds me a lot of my sister. Lord knows that girl could walk into a room full of strangers and make friends with everyone there in less than ten minutes.
Awaiting an update!
| scarletfireblaze 5/15/13 . chapter 15
Aww...so sad :,(
Cue the depression :P I loved the first line though! And the journal entries were a good way to give different points of view. Can't wait for the next update! :D
| anthonysupericewizard 4/29/13 . chapter 14
Oh no. Here comes depression T.T
| NightSkyWolves 4/22/13 . chapter 14
I am always correct! -slapped-
AWww... But Sloths are awesome! XD
I believe Brooke's mental changes are quite visible, and well described. Good work with that. :) Continue, and I look forward to le next update!
| scarletfireblaze 4/23/13 . chapter 14
Um...is Brooke going crazy? I DON'T KNOW! I feel like it's obvious, but I don't know whether or not her "mental changes" means that she's losing her sanity...yeah, I guess no cookies for me :(
Cookies aside, this chapter was really packed with emotion. I'm trying to get my brother to make a Fanfiction account, but I've already made him read most of your W101 fanfictions and he says they're awesome! Keep up the great writing!
| NightSkyWolves 4/11/13 . chapter 13
Donna is literally one out of three NICE Pyromancers I've heard of or met.
And now she's gonna die! I think...
I am a SLOTHY.
Did ya get a Sloth when they came out? I did. XD
| NightSkyWolves 3/19/13 . chapter 12
| scarletfireblaze 3/19/13 . chapter 12
:D Yeah, nice chapter! I like the idea of the journal, and that Private Sweeney got showed up by a girl. Too bad I can't go to Cyclops Lane, since I play the game for free...bleh. :P
Eh, who cares about me? You're an awesome writer and your stories are amazing! :)
| NightSkyWolves 3/7/13 . chapter 3
-sniffles- I'm not crying...
Emma: Yea, she is. :)
BUT IT'S SO SAD! BROOKE! WHY?! AND THEN YOU -spoilers-
| NightSkyWolves 2/23/13 . chapter 11
GAAAAAAAHHHHHH YOUR STORIES STILL DRIVE ME TO INSANITG WITH THEIR EPICNESS!
JSDJWJHEYWAJWKEJWJSNWNENWJSJ WKWKK AWESOME.
Continue, please! Sorry for my spazz. XD
| sock-feet-and-stirring-sand 1/16/13 . chapter 10
Tragedy strikes, and the adventure begins...
| LotsOfLovin 12/10/12 . chapter 9
I like it. And:::
OOHH! This is before the present day wizard101 time! I JUST noticed that now XDXDXD
| scarletfireblaze 12/10/12 . chapter 9
Ooh, I like this chapter! :D
I do have a question, though. In the fourth chapter, it said that msot people were bullies in Ravenwood. Is that what you meant? I'd actually think that there are only a few school bullies, and than other people might just avoid her, not particularly friendly but not really mean either.
But whatever you meant, I still really loved the chapter. I can't wait to see if Brooke ever does get over her fire fear.
Waiting for "le action" XD.
| Gishki 11/12/12 . chapter 4
*fanboy squeal* EVAN AND BROOKE FOREVER!