Amazing. -claps-

Oh. My. Gods. That is. I don't even have words.

Turning this into a one-shot was a wise decision.

One critique I have is the fight scene. I know it was supposed to be happening fast, but it took me a few lines to realize that Destiny was dead. I thought she was simply injured since you added no lines of cannon sounds.

Overall, a much better and stronger story.

This was really good!:D

I just finished reading the Hunger games series and you're story was truly amazing. I felt has if i was still reading from the Hunger Games. You really are an awesome girl

Ps could you please write another Hunger Game story thx

Awesome. I would never have thought of that but that means npthing cuz i cant write. So... ummm. Yeah. Cool.

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