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Little Dragon Girl 11/27/11 . chapter 1
Okay, will yo do me a favor?

BTW, I love yor hilarios story. It's long and fnny and descriptive. And kills off Sharpner. Yipee!

So, we're friends. Do this, please! It's a tiny thing.

So, I love the little openings and closings. By the way, I want Vegeta. Yor lcky yo got dibs on him. Now, yor nickname of Geta is good. However, to appease my envy/anger...

Will yo call him Veggie-chan in one of them?

I love when people call him that. Veggie-chan!:) It makes me smile...and LOL...and LOL...and stff.

So please do this. Please.
crazy fan-fic lover 4/8/11 . chapter 7
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UR AWESOME!
Hakuba Saguru 12/17/09 . chapter 7
update!
xdevil-childx 5/26/09 . chapter 7
please update
Afrodite 5/3/09 . chapter 7
How I enjoy Chi-Chi's Frying Pan rampages. This has been an entertaining story thus far, and it's too bad that your writer's block has prevented you from completing it. Writer's block has kept me from producing a full-length story in years.
Afrodite 5/3/09 . chapter 6
The situations in this chapter were priceless! There were so many humorous moments. As always, Vegeta steals the show with his unrepentant bad boy ways. I enjoy immensely how you portray Vegeta in your fics. Dende is a hoot, too.
Afrodite 4/25/09 . chapter 5
Chi-Chi and Goku in Gohan's sex ed class was priceless, particularly Goku's cluelessness about sex.

How hilarious that Vegeta was walking around Capsule Corp looking to "frighten somebody into making him breakfast." I enjoy how you portray Vegeta in your fics. His bad boy antics are always entertaining.
Afrodite 4/19/09 . chapter 4
I think you did a fine job with Launch, so don't worry about going OOC. I'm always amused by your portrayal of Launch's foulmouthed, gun-toting blonde alter ego.

Gohan's talk of Kami recipes was so funny, as was Dende's prompt response to patch things up before he upset Gohan further.
Afrodite 4/19/09 . chapter 3
Krillin was hilarious! I laughed when he threatened the students with a beatdown if they didn't behave. As Gohan pointed out, that was rather Vegeta-esque of him. Marron facing off with Erasa over "ownership" of Gohan was too cute. I was amused that Krillin took it seriously and questioned Gohan's intent with his daughter, considering Marron is less than half Gohan's age.

Entertaining chapter, and Dende's piƱa colada -drinking cameo was a funny touch.
Afrodite 4/19/09 . chapter 2
Funny, I wasn't expecting the Ox King to make Gohan teach the class in his place. How amusing and ironic that the Ox is illiterate, especially considering how obsessed his daughter Chi-Chi is with Gohan's studies.
Afrodite 4/12/09 . chapter 1
I always enjoy fics where the Z fighters substitute at Gohan's school. Surely I will enjoy this fic as much I enjoyed reading Field Trip. Already Dende is amusing me with his antics, and the Author's Corner shenanigans are as hilarious as ever.
gaul1 2/8/09 . chapter 7
GOOD STUFF...
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing 1/4/09 . chapter 7
Please update soon. You are still alive and kicking right?.
Steal Your Misery 11/27/06 . chapter 7
HAHAHAHAHAHAA! SO FUNNY!

You HAVE to update soon, it's probably one of the funniest things i've ever read! I LOVE IT!

UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!
R-Gomeni 9/1/06 . chapter 7
fantastic story, hope to read more, and soon!
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