Awkward, weird, tense are word that come to mind about their evening, and adorable too. I prefer mot to use cute since Bella would rather it not be used in reference to her when it comes to Edward.

Bella puts such a huge effort in keeping herself closed to others. It's going to take Edward lots more work to maje Bella let him in or crumble her defenses.

Can I say Edward is simply adorable? How he tries to say the right things but says the opposite. The way he gets her to talk back to him. And then he calls his father for advise. Turns out both have had to experience similar situations. His father used a letter while Edward went with a song, both were effective.

The Cullens have taken over Bella's life. One or more are constantly around. At times she appreciates it, while at others she feels overwhelmed by them.

Alice is a force to be acknowledged and considered. She is very clever and sneeky. As for Edward he seems as confused as Bella.

Edward changed his life for his sister and friend, that's love to you. He deserved something for it, and it seems he has found what he had dreamt about but didn't expect to find.

These two have developed an interesting frienship. I noticed how it seems everyone in town seems happy to see Bella spending time with someone, has she been that much of a hermit?

Alice is intense as strong as coffee, so Bella wo't be able to hate her. And Angela likes her already too!

Bella has made a nice, comfortable life for herself. That doesn't mean she is as happy as she could. She has built thick tall walls around her and she justifies them with the coffee shop. It all was fine until today, will she do okay with the inminent change?

Love all the sexual tension in this chapter, the hair brushing scene was fantastic! Have I told you how much I enjoy this story? I do; it's fabulous!

Oh, blasted assumptions, they're the cornerstone of Twilight, aren't they? What in the world reason do either of them have to be so cautious? Love your story, I was searching for a new chapter earlier today, I must be psychotic! :-)

Loved the chapter.

Things are starting to progress.

Great chapter. The sexual tension between these two is killing me. Thanks for the update.

Loved the chapter!

Edward is just all kinds of screwing things up, isn't he? I hope he opens up & is honest with her about things soon.

:)

Good chapter